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Old 04-28-04, 04:14 PM   #1
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5-15 lines
no d/r
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u spit first
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Old 04-28-04, 04:22 PM   #2
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checkin iiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 04-28-04, 04:46 PM   #3
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my clique is evil kanivel, the way we jump yall niggas/
ya clique is fuckin garbage so im gon dump yall nigga/
life aint good when u being chased by an infared beam/
u picked a dumb battle now u gettin ripped like k-mart jeans/
discharge act like he wanted the battle but he fearin my skills/
watch his verse take 2 hours to type cuz he try to mirror my skills/
u better be prepared for my skills/
i aint feel like wastin my time on a dude wit inferior skill/
erbody kno this bum dont wanna see the kid/
but he needed publicity for that piece of shit link in his sig/
cmon dog ill have ya body laid out in th grass/
dude love love the pen(jail) cuz he str8 ass/
ya life is a mirage,u got balls to battle me/
how long this dude be discharged go on, get some new batteries/
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Old 04-28-04, 06:28 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by gotaasswhoopin4U
my clique is evil kanivel, the way we jump yall niggas/
ya clique is fuckin garbage so im gon dump yall nigga/
^^^WEAK OPENER DUNNY
life aint good when u being chased by an infared beam/
u picked a dumb battle now u gettin ripped like k-mart jeans/
^^NO...WHO WEAR K-MART JEANS
discharge act like he wanted the battle but he fearin my skills/
watch his verse take 2 hours to type cuz he try to mirror my skills/
^^^NICE PUNCH & WORDPLAY
u better be prepared for my skills/
i aint feel like wastin my time on a dude wit inferior skill/
^^^I GET WHUT U TRYIN DA DO BUT IT AINT WORKIN
erbody kno this bum dont wanna see the kid/
but he needed publicity for that piece of shit link in his sig/
^^^COOL PERSONAL
cmon dog ill have ya body laid out in th grass/
dude love love the pen(jail) cuz he str8 ass/
^^UMMM
ya life is a mirage,u got balls to battle me/
how long this dude be discharged go on, get some new batteries/

^^^^CORNY ASS FINISHER DUNNY

explanation: ya verse was madd week dunn u have no punchlines..u had a lil wordplay and wun personal...u get a 6/10
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Old 04-28-04, 04:49 PM   #5
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tight verse tight verse iight im checkin in be done in less than 30
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Old 04-28-04, 05:21 PM   #6
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your last battle was your"15-minutes-of-fame",give it up youve already been "slain"//
nothing could help ya"game", "i got my ass beat" to that you should change ya name//
none of your "ass-whoopin"skillz remain,all your ryhmes and punches are played//
all your ryhmes are just fuckin plain,you have no skillz and thats another win i gained//
you and your crew should be ashamed, your gayer than prince in perple rain//
your soft like the kids from the "cabage patch" , your weak i already won this match//
skillz are something ull never catch,not even if i put them in a bone and had ths bitch "go fetch"//
i broke you like a"weak" trojan latex,folks this bitch is "dead" so pay your respects//
next time keep your ryhmes book and dictionary intact,good ryhmes or vocab. is what u lack//
my punches hit to fast for bitches like you to react,give rappin up,your fucking "wack"//
but il cut you some slack,u got less skill then nine-year-olds got hair on their "nutsack"//
so ill take your ryhmes and return em to "sender",your ryhmes arnt gold,just fools treasure//
ill killed ya ass with one gesture,obviously you fold underpressure//
ur a good contender,but i feel like im battelin uncle fester, im wrong even he could ryhme better//
yu sexoffender,your a "fuit",thats why you got served like an fruit smoothy fresh out the blender//
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Old 04-28-04, 06:32 PM   #7
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Quote:
Originally Posted by discharge
your last battle was your"15-minutes-of-fame",give it up youve already been "slain"//
nothing could help ya"game", "i got my ass beat" to that you should change ya name//
^^^LMAOOO WOW DAT WAS BETTA THAN HIS WHOLE VERSE
none of your "ass-whoopin"skillz remain,all your ryhmes and punches are played//
all your ryhmes are just fuckin plain,you have no skillz and thats another win i gained//
^^^NICE MULTI...AIGHT PUNCH
you and your crew should be ashamed, your gayer than prince in perple rain//
your soft like the kids from the "cabage patch" , your weak i already won this match//
^^^NAH
skillz are something ull never catch,not even if i put them in a bone and had ths bitch "go fetch"//
i broke you like a"weak" trojan latex,folks this bitch is "dead" so pay your respects//
^^COOL
next time keep your ryhmes book and dictionary intact,good ryhmes or vocab. is what u lack//
my punches hit to fast for bitches like you to react,give rappin up,your fucking "wack"//
^^^U SAID WACK LIKE 1009 TIMES DUNN
but il cut you some slack,u got less skill then nine-year-olds got hair on their "nutsack"//
so ill take your ryhmes and return em to "sender",your ryhmes arnt gold,just fools treasure//
^^^NICE PUNCH
ill killed ya ass with one gesture,obviously you fold underpressure//
ur a good contender,but i feel like im battelin uncle fester, im wrong even he could ryhme better//

yu sexoffender,your a "fuit",thats why you got served like an fruit smoothy fresh out the blender//


explanation:nice verse punches was there and u had a good lil flow but ya opener finshed him...9/10

my vote-discharge

RETURN DA FAVOR....DA LINKS R IN MY SIG
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Old 04-28-04, 05:34 PM   #8
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good battle i liked both verses


gotaa -u had some ite shit but u cant use da same word twice at da end it blow yo whole verse

bestline-erbody kno this bum dont wanna see the kid/
but he needed publicity for that piece of shit link in his sig/
dat was hott

worsteline-my clique is evil kanivel, the way we jump yall niggas/
ya clique is fuckin garbage so im gon dump yall nigga/

^^ bad way 2 start

overall verse get a **8**


discharge

u had a nice flow and some nice punches

bestline-your last battle was your"15-minutes-of-fame",give it up youve already been "slain"//
nothing could help ya"game", "i got my ass beat" to that you should change ya name//

^^^ nice start

worsteline-none

overall yo vere get a **9**

winner-discharge
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Old 04-28-04, 05:38 PM   #9
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goooood battle uppin for votes well return da favor
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Old 04-28-04, 05:39 PM   #10
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upppity uppin again and again
will return the favor
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Old 04-28-04, 06:27 PM   #11
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Opin
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Old 04-28-04, 06:52 PM   #12
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Uppin This Fuckin Battle Right The Fuck Now
I Hope I Dont Go Lose
Im Still Over 500. Niggas
Im The Nets Not The Knicks
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Old 04-28-04, 07:14 PM   #13
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discharge won

punches-discharge
mettas-discharge
multis-none
flow-GAAS
vocab-none
 
Old 04-28-04, 07:41 PM   #14
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ok breakdown for gotaa:
ur trying to be to tough
u cant use the same word 4 times in a row
overall 5/10
bestline:ya life is a mirage,u got balls to battle me/
how long this dude be discharged go on, get some new batteries/

overall for discharge: 8/10
this was a solid flow but u a bitch i aint gonna lie ill kick ya ass
your best line:so ill take your ryhmes and return em to "sender",your ryhmes arnt gold,just fools treasure//
ill killed ya ass with one gesture,obviously you fold underpressure//
if i was votin on who i hated more discharge would have lost
but if im voting on who has more skill discharge won so im givin it to discharge
 
Old 04-28-04, 07:48 PM   #15
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It goes down like this. Ass had the flow, and way better structure. Had a couple good lines. I liked that one about needin batteries or some shit, but that was about it
Discharged's lines were a little too long, but he had a little word play and good punches so he gets my vote.
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