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Old 07-22-04, 12:05 PM   #1
raw killa
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fuck da money n fame,im jus tryin 2 2live in da game//
take ur records n plaques,n jus give me a mic so i can rap//
jus give me a pen&paper,n sprinkle my flow through vapors//
get da fire ignited,n let my lyrics heighten ur excitement//
hear da beat in da drums,n feel da bass in yo subs//
give me respect n show me love,n hear da cries of a strugglin thug//
if i cant make it wit a deal,fuck it as long as i can afford a meal//
hear my feelings through dis lyrical scripture,dat paints perfect pictures//
i make dreams come 2 life,wit da words i recite//
ima make my talent appartent,so u nod ya head when u hear it//
born from da blood of rap,n shells bleed from out da mac//
i was born wit a gift &made it a talent,bitch hold my dick n toss my salad//
my split personality,makes my dreams a reality,n double sales in da industry//
take da best,from da west n da beast in da east,makes dis album complete//
best of both worlds like kelly n jay,n i do it like usher my way//
im holdin da weight,of da streets n im hungry fillin my plate//

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fuck ur deal n keep ur fame
if i make it than good if not fuck it
ill jus keep at it cuz practice makes perfect

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im known though out da world,n in n out ya gurl//
it takes minutes,2 write lines exquisite n explizit//
in a whip gettin brain,from a dame,who aint got no name//
im in da streets like tweakers,n droppin bodies like da grim repper//
roll a spliff,smokin da shit dat'll make ya body stiff//
im a portergeist,and strike,necks like vampire bites//
caught in da game like monopoly pieces,bred da best spieces//
fuck ya fictional lyrics,cuz i dont wanna fuckin hear it//
wit da mind of a mental patient,n im done waitin paitient//
stop ya fuckin hatin,im goin 2 b 1 of da best n there's no debatin//
when will i stop dis apocolpse,when i get 2 da top of da list//
until i leave da flesh,take my last step&breath,ill b here til da death//
but when i do die im takin da game wit me,n leave t beat up like whitney//
i put red dots on ya head like u etheopian,n leave ya brain smokin//
eat a piece of yo mind like hannibal,n eat ya virgin's cherry cuz im a cannibal//

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im workin wit new,lyrics 2 brew,dat leave ya ear drums bruised//
i study from da best,of those who died in da flesh//
im a general in my own mind,n i use these lines,like trenches when rhyme//
notice how i like sayin i n im,stay on da grim,n prepared 2 do da time//
and dont confuse me 4 eminem,its allik war n im nuttin like him//
ima take da spot,on top,with wut i retort,whether its givin or tookin by force//
& u can love it or hate it,but jadakiss we gon make it//
im lookin 2 fulfill a dream,n swim in a sea cream,n keep it loyal 2 my team//
i jus want u 2 feel me,n hoes scream 4 me,like they was watchin a scary movie//
jus show me respect n,if u ridin wit me ill share da wealth w/o rejection//
i spray wit teks dat scream,wit a thunderous sound when u fuck wit my team/
my drinks hit,wit a punch,dat no doubt gets shit crunk,or jus get ya drunk//
fuck battlin rappers,i fight on da mic in a disorderly manner//
come 2 me n test,ill put dis piece 2 yo chest,n blow ya heart out ya vest//
im tryin 2 make more on my income tax,than u do from n e 1 of ur raps//
im out like ciggarette smoke,drop da mic go 2 ur wife n stick,my dick in her throat//

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fuckin da game raw
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Old 07-22-04, 01:44 PM   #2
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ayt i kno peeps have viewed leave a fuckin reply damn u people r so scared 2 leave sum knowledge hit me let me kno wut im doin wrong i aint goin 2 bite ya shit peace please up up up up up^^^^^^ n go 2 my battle's n make ya honest opinion n vote
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Old 07-22-04, 01:51 PM   #3
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yo man livin the game aint easy. trust me i live in a hood where the rap game is all we pay tention to. and we rap battle all day. rap game is nuthin you wanna joke bout.
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Old 07-22-04, 01:57 PM   #4
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lol trust me in know plenty bout da game dogg ive lived n grown in it like its a part of my molecular structural or sum shit my brotha put me on 2 it well he not a real brotha but u kno wut i mean i kno da game inside out i kno it aint sweet n i kno da out come of daily life there aint pretty its wut u make it though da strongest survive but w/e im ramblin peace thanx holla 1 luv
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Old 07-22-04, 02:02 PM   #5
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i geuss you are a true thug.
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Old 07-22-04, 02:05 PM   #6
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hey y u think i dropped playboy thugs? i speak nuttin but truth when im locked in hells booth,give me mic n hand my boots,strictly business but make other rappers scream 4 truce peace out 1 luv holla back
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Old 07-22-04, 02:08 PM   #7
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yo rhymes dont even rhymes.............and plz stoop maki open mics like this...same old concept hood this...guns this wen you A WHITEBOY.......fuck i live in a hodd.....thats why no one cares bout you or ur neva gonna elevate...........cuz ur shits the same..........girl and expicit dont rhyme same with everything get rthat okay?....rap has to rap...aka rhyme..............god.......oka.y.......leave in room in open mic for dope ones like bullits opr undiscovered....
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Old 07-22-04, 02:16 PM   #8
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nigga u r so fuckin bitch wtf r u tlkn bout every rhyme i post rhyme u fuckin moron u need glasses r u seein straight where ya contacts ya fuckin pussy dont hate me cuz my style better than urs n if u read my lyrics i dont rap bout nuttin gun n shit n so wut im a white boy probly more gutter than yo bitch ass quit fuckin hatin u fuckin n go suck ur b/f cock im sick of u actin like u da shit ive read ur rhyme shit suck flat out u had decent but admit u'll neva reach my level n oh make of course ill make as soon i move back 2 jersey i gotta deal wit my homeboys so stop hatin bitch u nod ya fuckin head 2 eminem,d12,dmx,ruff ryders,jay-z,memphis bleek n so on n so on open ya ears n clean da wax out every 1 raps bout blunts 40's n bitches guns n murda dont fuckin hate cuz i can do so my self plus tlk bout life u fuckin prick ur a goddamn peon so shut it n get a new job n quit ridin my dick pussy
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Old 07-22-04, 02:19 PM   #9
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"im known though out da world,n in n out ya gurl//
it takes minutes,2 write lines exquisite n explizit//"

if u take a closer look u fuckin idiot these r 2 seperate line u fuckin moron jesus christ did u fuckin fall from da stupid tree n hit every branch or were u jus beat wit a moron stick u fuckin dumbass lmmao
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Old 07-22-04, 02:22 PM   #10
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yeah bitch you spelt hood wrong too. you blonde mutha fucka.
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Old 07-22-04, 02:24 PM   #11
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i dont nod my head to those guys...i respect em cuz they dope....your a dumb fuck.........if your not black dont rap like you are sayin nigga...and your structures wack dumbass.........go home learn to rap and maybe grow a dick cuz we know you have an absence of one..........open my ears?!?!?!this is TExt not audio you dumb fuck....god your retarded.........did your mom fucking smoke crack while she was pregnant with you.....wait did you just say ill never reach your level..........okay.....I aint shook...................you always say you nod ya head to eminem...cuz the guys a dope freestylist you cant even rap for ya life...nuff said....
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Old 07-22-04, 02:32 PM   #12
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bitch u dont kno me 4 shit so dont act tough on da goddamn internet quit ya fuckin hatin n let me do me y u do u i tell u how 2 flow do i u fuckin prick n i do got dick u want 2 prove it send ya girl ova ill give it 2 her n my mom i could careless bout my mom bitch chose my step-dad over me n left me homeless dont judge me cuz im white muthafucka u doont shit bout wut i been through im jus a getto n hood n thug as n e 1 of these people on dis n e website like it at least i fuckin try n dont uit u fuckin bitch show me respect u fuckin hater
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Old 07-22-04, 06:01 PM   #13
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ayt thanx 4 da replies but plz dont stop here tell me wut u think c'mon give good news bad news quit bein scared 2 leave a message uppin uppin c'mon^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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