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07-26-04, 07:55 PM
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Life Is Unfair- HOTT SHIT Everybody Peep
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hook- life is unfair but u play da hand dat u dealt/
some niggas wont make it its every man for himself/ crooked eyes scheme to get they hands on da wealth/ so be careful who u trust or you'll be laughin at death/ life's unfair but ima play it like a hand of spades/ my plans is made/ to blow up like a hand grenade/ i stand alone in deez streets, yup, a renegade/ wit da crome in da seat, cuz, they wanna end my dayz/ watchin my back on da land, but, neva been afraid/ cuz while dey tryna get at me dawg they menz get sprayed/ like a can of raid, i drop a bomb on deez roaches/ take a look up in my face see im young but im focused/ tryna make it out alive keep da guns out the holster/ and da fake say they gone ride but cant stomach the coaster/ and they tryna get closer, but no way/ cuz soon as they get locked up they go state/ lil nigga go play, if u cant hold me down/ no hoes around/ we blow da pound/ u on dat spot where dem vulture's found/ i tote da glock and controll da town/ and got yay from snow white to golden brown/
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07-27-04, 08:27 AM
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uppin for some feedback im always droppin feedback so stop sleepin
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07-27-04, 09:08 AM
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IP:
this drop is a very truthful piece u could have been more creative with the rhyme scheme but you still had a nice little scheme to go by on this..very true shit stated in ya rhymes espcially the chorus..which opened up the door for the verse to expectedly be ill nice job
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07-27-04, 09:20 AM
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fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP:
shit was nice i felt it keep doin yo thang homie check out my newest shit venomous spit wit country or my new freewrite thanx holla back n keep postin peace
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07-27-04, 09:33 AM
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IP:
Thats a pretty hot rhyme dawg, nice flow with good content. uppin for another verse.
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07-27-04, 09:37 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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 Yo I'm Feelin Yo shit cuz. Keep doin tha damn Thing! HallorLock-N-Load Entertainment Double L http://www.geocities.com/ukthaunkno...adEntertainment
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07-27-04, 09:53 AM
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IP:
that was hot man, feeling that. i agree, you could have been a bit more creative with imagery and wordplay and stuff, but the hook especially was real nice. keep doing ya thing and check my song when you got the time!
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07-27-04, 10:14 AM
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IP:
thanx for da feedback uppin dis shit
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