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07-29-04, 08:52 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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Gimme sum feedbac on this
IP:
 Yall say my raps need better structure Yall feedbac is my instructor, I thank yall fa lettin me know If my raps are rite or if they ruffa, I look to yall fa sum help Makin sure critasium gets dealt, I thank yall fa feelin my drops Cuz my rappin neva stops! I want to thank erybody who has given me sum helpful feedbac. An ask dat you keep do it. THANx
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07-29-04, 06:50 PM
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...tha princess of rv...
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gud.nice to know sumone appreciates feedback.
by the way I thank yall fa lettin me know If my raps are rite or if they ruffa ^that line didnt rhyme lol. structures beta though.
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07-31-04, 01:53 AM
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fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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feedback
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when actual feedback is given n not emotional stress cuz of constant periods feedback willl b respected n tooken noted but when u jus tlk shit no 1 cares no problem uk peeps forget wut feedback sumtimes means though u kno ignorance leaves peeps desperate n forgetful thanx 4 leavin feedback on my shit in da past keep doin ya thing n fuck da hataz
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07-29-04, 08:54 PM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP:
thnax Mani
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07-30-04, 07:31 PM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP:
yo gimme sum mo feed bac
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07-30-04, 08:17 PM
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Cypher King. True Story.
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IP:
Like Manipulation said, it's good to see you appreciate feedback. Other than that, keep elevating dude. I see your structure is better, too. Now you just need the other shit: meta's, multi's, etc. Keep at it.
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07-30-04, 08:50 PM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP:
Thanx GFX stay up nigga
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07-30-04, 09:26 PM
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COLD
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IP:
yo sun you ok but you need better metaphores and vocab but your struture looks good
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07-31-04, 12:46 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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yea it was koo as hell ey can sum one feedback my shit cus i need to no wat i can do to improve, thx peace
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07-31-04, 06:26 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP:
yo thanx yall keep tha feedbac comin
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07-31-04, 06:31 AM
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New to RB
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IP:
Short n dat but overall it was aite n had a nice flow keep it up....peace.....holla.....
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07-31-04, 06:32 AM
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New to RB
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IP:
Short n dat but overall it was aite n had a nice flow keep it up....peace.....holla.....
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07-31-04, 06:39 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP:
Thanx JaggyA Keep da feedbac comin
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07-31-04, 07:52 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP:
yeah its gd to know some1 app's feedbac and stuff...........but uhh what u wrote didnt rhyme yo..........anyhow keep it up
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07-31-04, 09:28 PM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP:
Thanx
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