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07-30-04, 01:34 PM
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My Turn To Shine - First Drop
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Yo dat bits highlited relate to songs aite.........
Spitting lyrics so hot like da SUN, I swear I must be da chosen one/ Sent down from GOD, blessed as a child they should call me da GODSUN// Like bone crusher im never scared, and when I attack you verbally you should beware/ Coz ya gonna get teared leaving you stuck in the lyrical garage getting repaired// Me and Killa gonna leave ya so stunned ya gonna stop BREATHEing/ Coz we so FABOLOUS throwing more punches than Ali when he use to do boxing// Fuck wit me I wont hesitate to BUSS MY GUN/ I was born wit a BRAVE HEART that will make you pussys stop bitching and start to Run// Like in the 100 metres when ya hear dat bang/ You will be making more noise and I’ll have you going faster than a mustang// PI like tha new WESTSIDE CONNECTION coz we starting up a new GANGSTA NATION/ Having you pussys tryna take me out but I keep coming back in a new Sequel like I was Jason// You can try and put me in JAIL, but you cant stop me rap coz this is wot I have had assigned/ So back off bitches coz this is jaggy A’s time to SHYNE…  uppin for some feed yo....holla..........peace............. |
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07-31-04, 05:42 AM
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Yo can i get some feed plzzzz.holla.......peace..........
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07-31-04, 05:53 AM
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IP:
A yo ya shit was OK but i've heard better. I think you need to work on your lyrics cuz some of tha shit you said... just didn't make sense. On a a scale of 1 to 10 I would give that a 7. So yah mean get ya weight up and keep on workin on ya shit 4-reel. A yo fuck it. That shit was garbage on some REAL shit. So if you got a problem with what I said let me know. It's tha boh WestOakLaneKilla so if their a problem go solve that shit. Holla at ya Fuckin Boi. Errly
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07-31-04, 05:57 AM
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IP:
WTF i aint got a problem wit ya feed it all respected yo aite so peace........and thanxs for da feed k.........peace.....holla........uppin for some more feed........
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07-31-04, 05:59 AM
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fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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ayt fuck wut da hata up there said nigga u had a good drop sum good punches n metas keep postin jus fix ur structure up a bit work on multis n keep doin ya thing
return da favor of feedback on post of mine n my crews my life(ruff tuff thug ft.shy n me)&troubled minds(ruff tuff thug ft. me) holla back stay up peace out
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07-31-04, 06:03 AM
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IP:
Yo aite thanxs,i aint bovered bout him anyway coz i av ad some good feed on otha sites.......aite il repay da favor and yo check my otha drop called perspective influence da got goos multis.....holla....peace........
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07-31-04, 08:29 AM
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IP:
ayo jaggy u know me lol
thats was a nice drop but i know u can do better homie, keep up ur shit is always nice
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07-31-04, 10:56 AM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP:
wasnt bad, nice rhyme scheme, get some multiez i there...
keep at it... |
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08-01-04, 04:14 PM
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IP:
Yo thanxs Guji and you seem to be on every rap site,lol.........holla......peace and thanxs yo........
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08-01-04, 04:47 PM
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In ya area.
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That was D-so to be honest. But man, you keep working on your shit and you'll get better, all you need is a little time. But yo, hit this link up with a vote dog...thanks. Stay up.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138751
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