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08-09-04, 09:46 AM | #1 | ||
New to RB
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A Breath Of Freestyle-give Me Feedback
IP:
I Know Yall Been Waitin For The Kid
Sorry To Delay Ya I Been Breathin The Rap Game Yall Just Smellin The Vapors The Boy Been Doin This Thang Since He Was A Kid Yall Just Startin To Notice How Nice He Is And Ima Keep Writing These Rhymes Keep Writin These Lyrics U Aint Breathed Enough Air To Understand When U Hear It I Make It Hard For Yall To Breathe Under Lyrical Vapors Me Stoppin U From Rappin Is Doin The World A Favor Yall Say Yall Hard Got Guns And Stedily Streamin But Dog Aint No Body Runnin Nobody Screamin I Aint Here To Threaten Yall Dudes But If I Run U Out Da Game I Just Do What I Do So Ima Keep Rappin These Vapors I Aint Stoppin Dude I Aint Cused Once On This Track And Im Still Killin U I Came Here To Be The Nicest Young Kid On The Block I Dont Really Care If Yall Peeps Like It Or Not So Im Just Tryin To Be The Best Runnin My Mile And Yall Pepole Was Just Induced To A Breath Of Freestyle |
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08-09-04, 10:13 AM | #2 | ||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
k man for a freestyle you diddent rhyme you sucked so bad these are what i rate you
wordplay:0/10 punchlines:1/10 flow:0 man that was wack shit lol |
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08-09-04, 10:27 AM | #3 | ||
New to RB
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IP:
Lemme Tell U Sumtim Bitch I Wright What I Think Is Hot I Aint Worried Bout Yall Media Bitches If U Read Anyone Of My Shits Its Fire I Heard Yo Shit And It Aint Dat Hot Niggia So Dont Come To Me Hatin Bitch U Dont
Feel My Shit Cause U Aint Got The Brains To Understand I Aint Even Stressin Niggias Like U Like Itor Love It Im One Of The Illest Bitch |
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08-09-04, 10:59 AM | #4 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
one of da illest? cmon dawwwg u cant cum to dis site gloatin bout ur self, but uhh yea u dint rym if u wana post thgat then put it unda poetci orsumthin but jus keep practisin, it was ok
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08-09-04, 04:58 PM | #6 | |
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP:
chalk clorox takin my line n shit practice makes perfect...lol.....
u rhymed in most places but not in sum but it was good i felt it keep practicin peace oh thanx 4 da love on my callabo peep da other titled welcome 2 our world posted by emerginmc07 peace
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08-09-04, 06:18 PM | #7 | ||
Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP:
ok shit for a n00b but you shud elevate
work on your shit 2/10
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08-10-04, 11:00 AM | #8 | ||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
this guy sucks and he said nigga are you black boi?
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