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Old 08-12-04, 01:49 AM   #1
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Just a quickie

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holla at ya boi

thanks bitches for holdin my pen
i'll cut ur arm off leav u out on a limb
niggaz here gettin out of my order
leavin floatin in bodies off n water
leave niggaz missin ya legz hoppin wit walkers
son ur father yo mama my daughter
im out wit the quarters
ya messin my money up i thought i just taught ya
straight evil takin it bak to the torture
yall all bitches runnin wit porkers (police
holy shit batman i go sumthin here forya
its ya mom in the bathroom she got caught on he voyeur
i got lil niggaz in the street just waitin to offya
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Old 08-12-04, 03:52 PM   #2
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structure needs work
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Old 08-12-04, 03:53 PM   #3
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oh so does rhyming
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Old 08-13-04, 12:59 AM   #4
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dat shti needs work reread it and change that shit work on the ryhmin and the structure, peace 1luv
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