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09-05-04, 11:32 PM
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sHooTout...want feed fo improvement..(a freestyle)
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B]sHooTout...[/B]
after dat last shootout, dere ain't nuttin to be shared u didn't hav to go thru wit it, nigga u weren't dared so bring ya gogglez, yea cuz i kno u scared blast two shots to yow eye, nigga u vision impaired dawg, u coulda even been spared cuz in ma head da victory has already been declared instead, i suggest u bring a vest if u wanna stay alive cause niggaz wit chest holes usually don't survive but if u get thru da rumble safe 'n sound imma be on yow block lett'in off anotha round oh, but u think ma glock lookz strange.. not da way it look from point blank range.. and wen u go to bed, i hope u pray cuz i'm already load'in clipz fo da next day... Last edited by underdawgZ : 09-07-04 at 02:07 AM. |
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09-05-04, 11:35 PM
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juss a short drop
if u dun lyke....open fo suggestionz |
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09-05-04, 11:44 PM
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Blow Me
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not too good.. lines were stretched off flow.. could be better... just keep tryin hard and u will do good...
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09-05-04, 11:46 PM
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...The Truth...
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yo, hot shit, u jus need to no how to rite and stuff, keep it up,u down for a Remix though? Shootout part2.
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09-06-04, 12:20 PM
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remix.....yea, i'm down fo it..
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09-06-04, 12:28 PM
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Light Weight
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yo keep doing your thing,,an you will be where you want to be in no time
Nice drop dog,,Remember only God can judge,,,God bless all feed back would hurt any one http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147764
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09-06-04, 12:34 PM
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yo, thx fo da reply.......god bless dawg..
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09-06-04, 11:20 PM
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by da way dawg.....Qin iz me reply'in too
juss so ya kno |
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09-07-04, 11:56 AM
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yo, look'in fo sum feed......
wanna kno wut to wrk on 'n wut ma strong pointz r.... |
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09-07-04, 11:57 AM
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if 'ny body wanna make a small remix, holla.......
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09-07-04, 07:57 PM
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you gotta hear me again
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i'll be on that remix and dawg it ain't the best but it better than the first one lol keep it up. you got 8 now so just keep going you need 20 but i'm saurprised you got so many people to give feed back
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09-07-04, 08:00 PM
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$Thug Life$
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need more wordplay,...
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09-07-04, 10:35 PM
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aiiet dawg....thx fo da reply
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09-08-04, 04:54 PM
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mor replies peeple..
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