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Check in by: 09-12-04 at 12:28 AM

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young_buckshot has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 11:59 PM.

eat it grimm feel my flow,gotta pack of zigs and a bag of dro
you fukkin pussy gonna be a no show
me and my venomspittin gonna blow
a fat load like u a fukkin hoe
i hate when ppl dont have no goal
be like tha rock and know your role
bitch u gotta fukkin clit ring in your lips
walkin around wit your j-lo hips
you fukkin bully your gonna get hit
cause im tha grimm one you aint shit
all i gotta do i touch u and thats it
sit here by tha pool and take a dip
you aint shit mann your fukkin wack
young buck said it best **get off my track**
peace yall thanx

grimripper has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 12:13 AM.

alright check it
yo im out here tryin to prove that im a worthy rapper
this guys like a bug getting merked by my bug zapper
this guys wack thinkin he cant beat the grim
the guy doesnt even have a win but wishes he were slim
buckshot spittin his rymes like he's some kinda sharp shooter
the only job he has is delivering papers on his electric skooter
the way i wrap dogg its electrifyin
cuz its my record not ur that the people be buyin
so when i win this battle u remember one thing
that nobody wants to hear about how u got ice and bling bling

its he's wack thinkin he can beat grim not can't..

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Voted For: grimripper

oo man.. i think ya'll both dropped no-show verses... YOUNG BUCKSHOT YOU ARE WACK AS HELL... flow was fucked.... lines didnt even make sense... grim u can come harder than that too.. but u definitely got this one.. u both need to elevate.. PEACE

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Voted For: grimripper


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Voted For: young_buckshot

i'm glad you took my advice and worked on structure... i'll vote...
your puinches werent that hard...7/10
you need work on flow...4/10
your structure was super...10/10
i liked ur rhymes...10/10

grim you never accepted my battle so i got no respect for you but you punches were hard...10/10
flow was off...4/10
structure was good...10/10
rhymes werent great but were good...4/10
so my vote goes to yungbuckshot...

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dude just becuz i didnt accept ur battle doesnt mean shit obviously u know this guy other whys u wouldnt have voted for him. dont vote if ur gonna do this. thats gay.
not only that i was probly doin another battle so i didnt get to u.

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Voted For: young_buckshot

This is a one sided battle in my opinion.........
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Opener-Young
Closer-Young
Structure-Young
Multies-Young
Personals-None
Punches-Young
Overall Best Verse-Young
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Grim you got alot of elevatin to do but it wasnt the worst i seen....but still i vote Young he had better everything....return the favor with an unbias vote on my sig....Peayce

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Voted For: grimripper

wow,this battle is the worst ive seen in a while, possibly ever......... but i got to give this to grim, he attempted somewhat of a punch with that bug zapper line ..... i hitnk...... you both need to elevate TONS, but im givin it to Grim

v/ Grimripper

Voted For: grimripper

alright both verses were pretty wack.. grim u came harder punch wise better flow.. buckshot too short of lines.. both need major elevation.. so work harder on that... you both are hella wack.. either of u want it step to me.. but i vote for grim

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Voted For: grimripper

Alright, vote goes to Grimripper!

yo im out here tryin to prove that im a worthy rapper
this guys like a bug getting merked by my bug zapper
Average intro, basic punch, no real depth to it.



eat it grimm feel my flow,gotta pack of zigs and a bag of dro
you fukkin pussy gonna be a no show
me and my venomspittin gonna blow
a fat load like u a fukkin hoe
Um...WTF absulutly pathetic, sorry man but it just is, you need to exstend you sentences and uses metaphores and wordplay!

Intro goes to Grimriper!!

this guys wack thinkin he cant beat the grim
the guy doesnt even have a win but wishes he were slim
buckshot spittin his rymes like he's some kinda sharp shooter
the only job he has is delivering papers on his electric skooter
Lol, good flow, 1st bar a bit crooked but it is straightened out as it works through...good flow!

me and my venomspittin gonna blow
a fat load like u a fukkin hoe
i hate when ppl dont have no goal
be like tha rock and know your role
bitch u gotta fukkin clit ring in your lips
walkin around wit your j-lo hips
you fukkin bully your gonna get hit
cause im tha grimm one you aint shit
all i gotta do i touch u and thats it
Pathetic flow, sentences to short, rapid ryming(try to exstend you sentences and say shit before you ryme ok!!)

Flow goes to Grimripper!!!

buckshot spittin his rymes like he's some kinda sharp shooter
the only job he has is delivering papers on his electric skooter
the way i wrap dogg its electrifyin
cuz its my record not ur that the people be buyin
These two lines are your best punches, the last lines not bad aswell, pretty funny but i think you need a bit of wordplay!

Young buckshot has no punches, he just rymes.

Punches go to Grimripper
Vote goes to grimripper, yo well done man keep it up, please return the faavour and vote on one of the battles below thx!

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uppin here lets get this thing closed

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