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Old 10-11-04, 07:10 PM   #1
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This track is called Craze joint i had dissed my other friend






I spit life changing lyrics, that break bones and leave ya back bent
excuse for a rapper, even ya best lyrics are an accident
i could get on u personally homey, but never mind
ill get u shook so hard it will break ya glasses leaving u blind
battling me? homey its easy for me, really no job
u couldnt get hard bodied, if i said pam Anderson would give u a blow job
Fly past, ya wack ass on a track, dissin u
put DEXTERS lab in da hood, and they come up wit u!!!
u crossed the path of hell when u chose to battle me
id bury ya 6 feet under like S_H_Y_N_E

The R>I>P punch

2 tec-9's , held up by a 9 x clip
lets think, even if u had DIAREHEA u couldnt still spit hot shit
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Old 10-11-04, 07:13 PM   #2
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yeah it was aight but nned some more wordplay... uhm flow was off too... man this wasnt hate... check my shit... its in the sig... its called True Love...
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Old 10-11-04, 07:13 PM   #3
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i didnt wanna do nuttin special cuz i did this during a lunch period
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Old 10-11-04, 07:16 PM   #4
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lol aight... well check minez any way plz...
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Old 10-11-04, 07:51 PM   #5
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this isnt to bad. wordplay need's to be edited. Flow wasnt to bad a little off on spot's. Disses were all good..
nice drop .keep them coming...pz
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