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11-28-04, 05:06 AM
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New to RB
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Troubled Lifestyle
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stepping quietly,making sure no-one is around.
all I hear is the wind,and stick's breaking on the ground sneaking,while walking,I keep look out over my shoulder I never thought this is how it would end,thought I'd die much older keeping my eye's open,and constantly aware I never thought I would go thru with this dare I thought i wouldnt,but obviously I do care Feeling's run thru my spine,Know I no the feeling of true fear I hear a noise to the left, I speak quietly,yet load enough for them to hear "who's that? whos there? the scamper away leaving me in chill's now I can see why people pre-write there will's Im stuck hear,with no option to carry on forward. i wish I had a weapon anything,even a swored no one around nme ,not even the lord i carry on there's no turning back why did i let my self get into this postition im to scared to even start wishen, deperate feeling's running thru my vain's i wish some 1 was with me ,so they could feel my pain's
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11-28-04, 05:19 AM
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im dangerous
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good
 u had flow rhymes don o bout stuckture but u did well |
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11-28-04, 05:22 AM
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IP:
uhm thanx. whew....
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11-28-04, 05:27 AM
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im dangerous
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lmfao...........................
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11-28-04, 05:36 AM
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IP:
*agrees*
all good cept for structure.. that's good comin form me..cuz I'm mean to everybody ask aroundzzz
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11-28-04, 05:37 AM
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IP:
ok baby boi you must be a pro. lol
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11-28-04, 05:38 AM
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IP:
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lol yes I am...
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The Competition
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11-28-04, 05:51 AM
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New to RB
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IP:
I Know a pro at making the ladies happy....
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11-28-04, 05:55 AM
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im dangerous
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IP:
Felicia..........................carm down.................
lmfao............................ |
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11-28-04, 06:02 AM
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New to RB
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IP:
ok i will i will.........
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Secretary For "fi-del"
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11-28-04, 06:18 AM
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im dangerous
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lmfao.......................................
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11-28-04, 08:10 AM
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.Retro-Bution.
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11-28-04, 09:41 AM
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IP:
free psot but its iite. upping this song.
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Secretary For "fi-del"
.I Got A Kind Gentle Soul.
.You Don't Wanna Mess That Up. |
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11-28-04, 10:11 AM
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Light Weight
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IP:
yeah good flow but work on the structure all in all lmfao but hit me up im new so w/e
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583
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11-28-04, 10:13 AM
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IP:
ok babe I will.
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Secretary For "fi-del"
.I Got A Kind Gentle Soul.
.You Don't Wanna Mess That Up. |
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