Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-15-04 at 12:13 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

FLiPakaJR has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 12:13 AM.

Elemental Soul has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 12:14 AM.

First Battle at the Frontlines, Took my War cry at you/
put his face on a porn magazine till he got mad like a gurl with some issues//
this is the start of the battle? this is the start of the race/
he force his rhymes so hard enough you can see the sweat on his face//
named ya elemental soul, scientist couldn't figure-out who you are/
this dude had to take steroids in order to get his dick hard//

dawg i thought it was quick 6 lines..... its like taking you more than 20 min....

ok 30 min pass y0 and you still havn't posted up your "6 LINES" yet... don't think hard y0 let it out natural

You remind me of a dead acrabatic,you cant 'flip',
Broken sidekick,holden no weight like an anerexic,
Ya flow's like a leaky faucet,face it,u lost it,
Your rhymes make no sense,like crackhead's flossen,
I'll piss on this fan like the pacers next to a piston fan,
Your better off lost and neva found like the promised land.

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Voted For: Elemental Soul

hmm this was an easy one to choose

i voted for elemental....
elemental had more multis, better vocab, his words rhymed better, structure was even from both of you i guess, element had a couple inners...it was an overall better verse


flip....u need to elevate....read some of the elevation tutorials and youll be ok....try n get better

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Voted For: Elemental Soul

v/elemental

beta verse wiv some nice punches n gud flow, other kid had some stretched lines n i wasn't feelin his punches....

pz

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Led Poetic

Voted For: Elemental Soul

elemental soul got my vote cuz he had some good hits and i like that metaphor...check out my open battles n put up your vote be fa real tho on who ou think got it holla

Voted For: Elemental Soul

Flip:
well i wasn't really feelin ur verse, didnt like how u kinda stretched all out and made the lines uneven..ur vocab was pretty decent..didnt see no wp from you, but those punches need improving cuz they werent that hard tho..so elevate more tho

E.S:
an alright battle here from you..prolly not ur best but it was aight here..punches were pretty hard hittin..at least hard enuff to win u this battle..didnt see no wp's from you..ur structure was aight..but overall u took this battle tho..

no hate tho..

RTF Elemental Soul

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=168429

^And explain your vote please

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7 Day Theory

Voted For: Elemental Soul

have to go with elemental
flow ele
strucutre tie
rhyming ele
opener-closer Flip
imagry ele
vocab ele
hits ele
all together ele so look up my bats and hit up and be honest peace.

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