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12-27-04, 03:11 AM
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Back at it Again
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im back at it again......
Brick Wall we used to kick it wen we were young, i thought i knew
.who u were, but i was wrong, u werent holdin true u were holdin back, and retreatin back home alone locked the door on ur soul, and they key was gone and now im starin at a brick wall that ur buildin up every brick represents the trust... that uve given up its cemented with the lies u believe from other people but i can see through- all that shit that i could breathe through all that shit, and see you, a cryin lil girl, in ur tiny lil world and everytime uve been lied to, its grown and unfurled another wall goes up, until ur surrounded by all four no windows now no door, no more to explore no more of those nights, u wont even let in the light of hope, with no cope of the world, this- is not life u hide from the hugs, u tried to hide from the love built a roof from the heavens, so u can hide from above ............................u WERE-- a diamond in the rough........ . . now you gotta whole home, no 'fones', no 'tone', for ur protection?
.from the World, no 'strings attached', no 'cords', no 'connection' we were the 'same', thought perfection, but now were seated in different sections tore down all the 'mirrors', too afraid to look, and that you'd see my 'reflection' its my recollection that you sed we'd be together 'till death be mentioned i know i showed signs of reprehension, but you're mine till the endin ......Girl............................its time for ur resurrection go Kilo . . Last edited by FuxJustAWord : 12-30-04 at 10:12 PM. |
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12-27-04, 02:05 PM
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IP:
^^^^damn, not even a view yet
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12-27-04, 02:38 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP:
OK
nice expressing it, use more vocab words cause its too basic, shit nice wordplay nice struture overall-8/10 uppin on the vocabs peace (you need 2 links to post your open mic)
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12-27-04, 02:57 PM
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IP:
yea i know......... ill hit urs up
 yea i went basic kinda for the story tellinhttp://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1848494 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1848514 Last edited by FuxJustAWord : 12-27-04 at 03:11 PM. Reason: adding the links |
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12-27-04, 08:12 PM
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP:
damn dawg...... u did DAT in 10 minutes??????????? ay we should do a collab or sumthin off dat. hit me back wit a pm if u want 2 den i'll pm my verse 2 u.
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12-28-04, 02:17 AM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP:
uppin for some more feed
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12-28-04, 07:02 PM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP:
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12-28-04, 10:40 PM
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...Simply The Best
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IP:
this was pretty nice...flow was there and some good punches...vocab was a little basic but other than that...this was a good drop...8/10
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12-29-04, 09:05 PM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP:
uppin for a lil more feed
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12-29-04, 11:22 PM
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Whys That?
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IP:
good drop, rhyme's are ok, flow is allright.
overall 7/10 |
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