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Old 01-09-05, 05:08 PM   #1
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Just Rambling!

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If i write this in a paragraph the flow is amazing but im gonna do it in bars atm...

check it...

I still got nothing to impress, bitch's get left ugly and dead
Touchin ya head, because my cypher is like russian roulette
Bitch's bite cushions on my bed, whem i'm pushing her wet
Shouting "fuck me to death" like she sufferes terrettes
You take puffs to the chest, I take storms to the brain
So while youre clutching your neck, I'm forming a phrase
I nuture creative juices, the one's that mother nature uses
But with sick twists from quick wrists, I make it exclusive
Tainted with music, like im playin the blues to satanic movements
Still crazy, got me using spray cans as deordorant for amusement
Im adding another verse, and passing above the earth
Its obvious nothing helps when you actually put in work
While i casually flood ya turf, how i master these fuck words
Sit back and just observe, these acrobatics and structures
Leave emcee's traumatic, with grammatics and terms
I'll give ya guts to worms, leave ya concussed and burned

I've been insane, and i took the ashes plus the dirt
I used to just be mean, now i'm savage and beserk

just rambling on about nothing


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Old 01-09-05, 05:14 PM   #2
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lol, damn if thats rambling then..blah


I like this, especially the line about spray cans. This has a allright flow to it.

Im adding another verse, and passing above the earth
Its obvious nothing helps when you actually put in work
^^
this bar is dope as fuck.

good drop(for just ramblinglol)
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Old 01-09-05, 05:18 PM   #3
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lmao..ye..pretty dope for just rambling......good lil drop....

drop some feed on this please..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171262
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Old 01-09-05, 05:58 PM   #4
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damn....for just rambling.......this was pretty dope......i liked a few of ya punches

Bitch's bite cushions on my bed, whem i'm pushing her wet
Shouting "fuck me to death" like she sufferes terrettes

^^^^^^^^damn nigga....that was crazy....now RTF in me and denied truths collabo...
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Old 01-09-05, 09:46 PM   #5
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aiight ill hit up your oms in a min. thx for feedback upping
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