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01-10-05, 05:52 PM
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Two Mics-C-BO and Indeph
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hook-Indeph The Effect of two..............Mics can alter the outcome even if just to......night if not yet you....might...one crowd...two...guys... changing actions..and creating new minds... Verse 1-Indeph the rapper you hearin for free...boy fans who loved me gay or strait..you just trust me..you cheering for me I know there's a soul behind the facial skully I know you hate to bug me..but I'm here..and not to laugh this the only case I'm not frontin'..I'm always there..I got your back put me on your rador..for needs..for other things not a track I'm a human being I aint got to rap..don't depend on me I aint a homie that you got to track..I relate to you if you wanna speak to a homie that gots it bad..I drop the bag and the baggage..to not ruin your day..even if its that bit the baggage..I take and trash it..that's it..tell me what's wrong if I reached out to you anytime..tell me what song.. I was playin If I ever lied..just tell me what tone.. I'll give you the scoop..like the hispanic on whats on I'll save your life..on myself I'll use the knife if I cut wrong.. we just that tight..my life..compared to yours is just that price.. I'm speaking to everyone in the world..even if we just met tonight.. if I'm around everyone out there alright...its just compasion.. how far would I got with one mic..just imagine... hook-Indeph The Effect of two..............Mics can alter the outcome even if just to......night if not yet you....might...one crowd...two...guys... changing actions..and creating new minds... Verse 2-C-BO america is day-by-day...further and further plummeting... and im wondering why our economy is never summeting... with stocks fallin...is george bush tellin much of the truth... or is our whole society a lie and he's just fuckin wit you?... as we stay stuck in the roots of the past debt and deciet... whose gonna be the one to make a change unless it is me... with the government threatenin we as the people in fact... to keep our eyes closed while they leavin our streets filled wit crack... and we always act clueless to all of the evidence presented... of overseas conflicts that are at best, extremely senseless... so the sense in sending troops to iraq is nearly defenseless... with nothing to gain...and lives to lose affecting the census... and the national defense is deploying more men to go each day... with fathers and brothers in combat overseas, so we pray... that god will play a part in bringing them back to they're loved ones... with money leading our country, but in heart we're above none... hook-Indeph The Effect of two..............Mics can alter the outcome even if just to......night if not yet you....might...one crowd...two...guys... changing actions..and creating new minds... u must drop a link with PROPER FEED-BACK with-in 24 hours or this will be closed.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871
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01-10-05, 06:47 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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good verse...ill get back wit more feed later..
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01-10-05, 06:52 PM
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this was a good collab - both had good verses and both were very interesting - 9/10
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01-10-05, 08:27 PM
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Back....
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I don't get it but I thought the flow was good and I thought the weerd play was dope. Nice structure and I felt everything. Dope peice.
8/10.
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01-10-05, 08:51 PM
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real real good yall...really feelin dis here collab 4real
9/10-straight up
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01-10-05, 10:40 PM
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After reading this it makes me wanna start sooner indeph... Lets do the shit finally, You, me, cbo, and final...
But this was really good i especially liked the hook and yes indeph he is getting good at some of those multies... with stocks fallin...is george bush tellin much of the truth... or is our whole society a lie and he's just fuckin wit you?... Good line right there with a hot mutli... But the chorus was the best part in my opinion, 9.5/10. |
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01-10-05, 11:03 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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damn yall threw down some decent lines but i dont feeel deph put his heart in this as much as c-bo did man what are you doing wheres the heart at homie...but you still droped good yall know that...just make sure you try harder next tiem deph...
ight check it: cbo: damn homie you droped tight i actually like you being in LM word....you use good vocabulary and good metaphores very emotional good creative line shomie yall know where its at now...haha....word...but yea man jsut keep that shit up ive seen good elevation in you these past few weaks...keep it up your flow is developing and your stucture is there..word...keep doin that shit homie... indeph: damn you droped pretty well....not the best tho i thought you didnt put your heart into it even tho you had good emotion but i think your flow lacked a little bit...but it was a good verse your emotion was good and your vocab was decent it got better towards the bottom...but good verse still homie just work harder i think youve been dry latly iunno writing to much jsut tierd...prob good job tho pz yall return the fav the links are in the sig yo deph hit my scareface diss and yo cbo hit my other link unsuitable life....much appreciated... -Parallel |
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01-10-05, 11:49 PM
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...Simply The Best
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thanx for tha feed back everyone...uppin for more
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171501
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01-11-05, 01:40 AM
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Middle Weight
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A blind maniac that rhyme whack with no structure
Just take notes and leave fake quotes be there’s a sculpture Of me on your fore head, pause with the trouble look I’ll cause your brains to bubble like boiling tea you shook You’re in a strange dominion need to change your opinion And move slightly while I groove nightly giving sexually attention To your girlfriend make her head whirl and spin when the cock in |
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01-11-05, 01:41 PM
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Banned
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u must drop a link with PROPER FEED-BACK with-in 24 hours or this will be closed....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871 c-bo 1 line feed-back WONT CUT IT MANG.... |
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01-11-05, 04:35 PM
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...Simply The Best
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01-12-05, 12:14 AM
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...Simply The Best
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