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MARVjay1009 5 100.00%
.I.nsane .G.angsta 0 0%
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Old 01-19-05, 04:51 PM   #1
DeHotBwoy
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MARVjay1009 vs .I.nsane .G.angsta

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min 8-10 lines Max
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5 Day check
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Check in by: 01-24-05 at 04:51 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Closed - Expired / old battle win
 
Old 01-19-05, 05:06 PM   #2
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Old 01-19-05, 05:10 PM   #3
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Yea i know u wan't me to begin with 1 of them phony start's
You a bliss rapper, i stick n cap ya like bullets stayin in young heart's
You battle cali exspect a win now i gotta battle u make it a repeat
You must be mistakeing, when its below 35 is the only time u see heat*
I really smell defeat, cause kid u surely aint getting this one
I'm real deep and let u stand the 6 feet like u was the man big pun**
Man u real cheap scared of this insane 1 comeing to spoil your lungs
Cause this coward Ape's face don't wanna meet the fist to ground like Donkey Kong***



*: when its 35 degrees or below u can see the heat from ur breath
**: Big pun was like 6 feet 3 but he is dead and he's 6 feet under ground .R.I.P.
***: Hit his fist and his face on the floor donkey kongs fist he use's them to walk so they meet the ground instead of the fists meeting the ground his face meet the ground u kno
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Old 01-21-05, 05:12 PM   #4
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Old 01-21-05, 05:18 PM   #5
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[/font]I Checked in at 6'06 pm and spit at 6'10 pm and u sayin i pre-wrote my shit damn fam u really retarded or somthing [/font]
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Old 01-21-05, 05:19 PM   #6
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LoL any wayz uppin this when he spitz
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Old 01-21-05, 07:04 PM   #7
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pardon da wait...stupid


look dogg..whut i need a book 4? dis BiTCH iS SCaRy...
i told em "step up ya vocab" he put his "foot on a dictionary"
stupid!......u joined non-phixional dat aint PROVEN u a VET
dont try da say "basketball practice" is y u losin on da "net"
even when u was JERSEYZ CHAMP u still spit da same
i aint c no COMPLEX ILLNESS..be4 u switched ya name
ya wife's a rat,u dont like da facts dont even write dem raps
i bet u would be a "DJ" if could start ya life from "scratch"
i see u a lazy prick,u know in ya heart dat dis cat jay-be-sick
ya girl a hoe she had more "sea-man" on her than a "navy ship"

explinations...

2nd bar...he claimed dat basketball practice was da reason he spit some corny shit
3rd bar...his aliases is JERSEYZ CHAMP N COMPLEX ILLNESS


no hate votes pleez ppl....
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Old 01-21-05, 09:06 PM   #8
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LoL DUNNY my alias aint Jerseyz Champ or complex illness i got a name change whata retard LOL dis dunny weird
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Old 01-21-05, 09:31 PM   #9
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oh my god marv. that was hot. didnt peep Insanes shyt yet but this was fuckin fire...DAYUM
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Old 01-22-05, 07:53 AM   #10
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

ryt good battle i just think that marv had a stronger verse on this.... imma break it down

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Yea i know u wan't me to begin with 1 of them phony start's
You a bliss rapper, i stick n cap ya like bullets stayin in young heart's
nice opener and good punch... 7/10
You battle cali exspect a win now i gotta battle u make it a repeat
You must be mistakeing, when its below 35 is the only time u see heat*
lol send line was good but i didnt like the first 6/10
I really smell defeat, cause kid u surely aint getting this one
I'm real deep and let u stand the 6 feet like u was the man big pun**
nice punch and good use of multies 7/10
Man u real cheap scared of this insane 1 comeing to spoil your lungs
Cause this coward Ape's face don't wanna meet the fist to ground like Donkey Kong***
lol decent closure and a decent punch...8/10

overall i thought you had a hard decent verse ill give you... 8/10 stay up...

marv...

look dogg..whut i need a book 4? dis BiTCH iS SCaRy...
i told em "step up ya vocab" he put his "foot on a dictionary"
haha this had me rollin on the floor nice punch 8/10
stupid!......u joined non-phixional dat aint PROVEN u a VET
dont try da say "basketball practice" is y u losin on da "net"
lol nice personal and decentpunch... 8.5/10
even when u was JERSEYZ CHAMP u still spit da same
i aint c no COMPLEX ILLNESS..be4 u switched ya name
another good personal... 8/10
ya wife's a rat,u dont like da facts dont even write dem raps
i bet u would be a "DJ" if could start ya life from "scratch"
lol dj/scratch nice wordplay there... 8/10
i see u a lazy prick,u know in ya heart dat dis cat jay-be-sick
ya girl a hoe she had more "sea-man" on her than a "navy ship"
lol nice wordplay decent closure and nice use of multies 7.5/10

overall i think you had a hard hitting verse with some decent personals and good flow.... ill give you 8.7/10

i liked both verses but i think imma give it to marv becuz he had better hard hitting punches and better flow... stay up and no hate... pz.
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Old 01-22-05, 12:48 PM   #11
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goodlookin uppin 4 more votes
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Old 01-22-05, 09:50 PM   #12
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uppin 4 more votes ppl
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Old 01-23-05, 12:42 PM   #13
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I cant vote in this battle but as feedback it was a good battle.
 
Old 01-24-05, 01:39 PM   #14
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uppin 4 more fukkin votes and stop checkin da polls fam damm
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Old 02-05-05, 12:52 AM   #15
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiinnn nnnnnnnnnn
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