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02-28-05, 03:46 PM
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Under The Covers
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yo peep this track!!...eney feedback or tips would be much appreciated...drop links!
www.soundclick.com/kaveh7 "Under The Covers" Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1991280 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1991284
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02-28-05, 04:01 PM
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New to RV
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Listening..
The beat is hot Im feeling it. Quality is nice. Voice is aight. I Dont really like the idea you got for the hook, I'd try something else. Flow and presence is ok. Lyrics is real. Good Shit. Overall though this song is aight. Keep at it Can you reply to http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179403
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02-28-05, 05:00 PM
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no doubt man, ill hit ya link up now
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02-28-05, 05:30 PM
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Aight Checking It... Your Voice Is A Lil Empowering Over The Beat When Spittin Your Verses. But Your Quality Is Decent. I Dont Hear Any Problems With Your Quality. Lyrics Aren't Bad, Not Canibus Shit but For This Type of Track Those Lyrics Seemed To Fit. Your Flow Wasn't Bad, You Seemed To Stretch Some Words To Fit A Snare or Two but Besides That It Was Solid. You Sounded Liek Em When You First Said Yo, I Was Like "Wtf?" LoL... Overall: This Is Overall Decent Track, The Chorus Needs To Highered If Your Gonna Use That, Lower Your Vocals A Few Decimals...Do Those Two Things, Oh and Add Another Verse. Its Decent Man. Stay Up. Return The Favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177539 ~R~ |
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02-28-05, 08:41 PM
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no doubt man! thanks alot for the feed, ill hit ya link up now
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03-01-05, 04:13 PM
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uppin..........
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03-01-05, 04:28 PM
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aight the beat is coo...lyrics are felt... real shit yamean...not feeling ya delivery to much tho...mic presence needs work...sound like you reading...flow was aight needs a lil polishing tho...breathe control problems stunble on a few words...quality is good...overall this is an aight joint fam. peace
. . return the feedback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179666
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03-01-05, 07:39 PM
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no doubt man, ill work on it!
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03-01-05, 08:55 PM
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"Fuck Wit Me, Then You Fuckin Wit Tha Best"
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song was alright, i liked it buh it couldve been better. beat was hot and voice was on point buh agin like Tmks said, u sounded like u stumbled on a couple of words, good though
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03-01-05, 11:28 PM
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thanks for the feed man, ill work on it
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03-02-05, 01:23 AM
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Flyweight
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I like the beat, coming in with a good flow......first verse was good, i didnt really feel the hook though..............second verse is good too, but wordplay could b a lil deeper on both verses, the last bar on the second verse didnt really work out that good. OH that wasnt a hook, wat was that then? let me peep it again.........ok i like the beat again, hahaha, .................stay cutting my wrists but keep missing the viens, that was dope, missed it the first time...................i cant hear it that well, but it's not a hook, its you talking, my bad. I guess it works, you might want to pump that up some I couldnt really hear it. It's good but has room for improvement. Keep at it
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03-02-05, 05:20 AM
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yep! i understand wat you sayin, ill work on it
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