these mystical visions, of persistance incisions, blindin me
like a slice thru tha retina, im get in a, pain in my mind indeed
cant think of lyrics, no nouns and verbs, so i smoke pounds of herbs
and get high, elevated to a new height, beyond all words
no longer does the dictionary, confine my speech
newbs to rap, gotta lot to learn i gotta lot to teach
im very wise in my ways, despised in my days
not followin tha chosen path, hoes and cash, it was a jus phase
now im thinkin on new levels, bass and treble, adjustin
the words i wrote, wont erode, never get old, never rustin
herbs is disgustin, comin at me wit this gun shit
i spit 3 setups, wait for tha punch, then they out in one hit
theyre mental capacity, cant match wit me, i expand
and overwrite the written when i spitten, whats next man
i can go on forever till time subsides to darkness and rhyme
all thats left is langauge, fuck tha stainless, i kill thru my lines

thats hott

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my liNK

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uppingggggggggg

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dawggy u spitten hot fIAHHHH, that shit was as hott, as j lo on a summer day........corny lol......nice structure-10/10........vocab-7-10.........multi's-8-10.....overall 25/30 nice dropp, u keep progressin and droppin u gon get o/m of the year award........maybe........lol holla back at my o/m mike jackson diss lol

i wish i could get tha OM award.... *hint hint* nominate me lol not on this tho this aint all that great i got turned down by tha council wit this verse.... apperantly they dont like my shit... uppin

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thanks man.. uppin for more feed

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uppin this piece.. gimme some feed

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up up 1-2 up up 1-2

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chea chea...shits hot...idk y they turned u dwn..they check out ur otha shit...o well...i liked it ...good....fuego....fire...feu....Feuer...o fogo....il fuoco...lol...its fire in 6 languages....izno shady!!!

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iight straight up kid *izno shady* upping for some more feed

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lemme get some feedback on this right here..

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post some feed people

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you def had some good vocab in this .....flow was onpoint....ya structure was iight....i felt the opener the most....yea, yu got talent...keep writing

return the favor?...Birth of a Goddess.

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.Re-Writing The Re-Run.

iight thanks for tha love girl. uppin for more.

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