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Old 08-30-05, 03:34 PM   #1
SINISTER
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Yeah, Lets Drop it....

If You Got Somthing To Say Dont Even Try
My Mediphorical Insight Has A Disquise,
Open Your Eyes, Before I Hit You By Suprise
Before You Relize Its Time,
Hide from Sinnister Lines
Die By the Sinnister Rymes,
Stand By, Watch Your Minister Cry
While I Laugh, I Was Born Blind,
To bad time can never rewind
Open up Your Brain Let Me Inside,
Let Me Fry Your Mind,
Till Evil Thoughts Start To Bind
Till You Feel Like A Ball Of Twine
You just collapse, From Your Vertabrae Backward
Im Comming From Behind To Attack You
Matter of fact, Dude I Dont Need To Out Rap You
I Just Need To Out-last You, If Its Cool ill Slap you
With A Blast
Leave You Doing A Headstand In A Pool
Be a man, not a fool, OYD Fucker,
Remember Who said Who
And Who You Said Shit Too,
I Won't Say A Name And dont Need A Track To Diss You,
Soon I'm Gonna Miss You And 6 Bullets Out my Pistol..............
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Old 08-30-05, 04:24 PM   #2
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Yo this is pretty decent. You should get a mic and record it b/c it's kinda hard to see how each bar flows. But overall it's aiight some pretty good vocab. Im glad you're not trying to be like everyone else on the site tronna to use every big word in the world just to make your shit sound like its deep ...

You kept it simple,keep it up.
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Old 08-30-05, 07:42 PM   #3
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Old 08-31-05, 02:17 PM   #4
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Old 09-18-05, 07:26 PM   #5
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pretty good i liked it i dont kno if anyone else did but good job
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Old 09-18-05, 08:36 PM   #6
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Eh At Rep Tracks

... The Flow Was Straight,
But You Really Didnt Have Any Punches That Were To Good.

Like Matic Said, Record This Shit
... It Would Be ALOT Better On Audio.

The Flow Was Pretty Good Cuz You Used Short Lines
... But Ya, Next Time Try A Topic With Some Deph.

I'm Interested To See How You'd Handle It.
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