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View Poll Results: Tha Notorious D vs. WyteKnyte
Tha Notorious D 2 28.57%
wyteknyte 5 71.43%
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Old 10-01-05, 09:22 PM   #1
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Tha Notorious D vs wyteknyte

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Old 10-01-05, 09:23 PM   #2
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Old 10-01-05, 09:28 PM   #3
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Old 10-01-05, 09:50 PM   #4
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Dis mo'fucka got all his wins off newbies.....dawgs straight herbin it lmao

Dawg you battle newbies religiously,im given you a beatin
Another easy win , these battles should be considered cheatin
I stop and laugh ,you throwing a punch is hard to see
On a battle site, still aint trhown a punch...ya whole verse dont diss me
Ya rap skill, nah man ya lack skill..dawg seriously your a herb
Try n rap wit a verb..Smack tha shit out you plant ya face on a curb

Ill end this battle with your structure, so its a close race
Shit now I suck ass, this structure to rap is a big disgrace



blah blah blah....aint nuffin
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Old 10-01-05, 10:09 PM   #5
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I'm tired of you talking about you claiming you can rap-
When all you talk about is hoes, money, and things you wont dare to grab//

HIV is the only thing about you that's positive
Stop your lyrics cause they getting norrogitive//

Jersey City, Nj Is my hometown the realest niggas you will ever see
But in beantown, you posing niggas, yall wanna be me//

I've seen mad fake niggas in beantown and i think its lame
Ya'll so fictionated you look like a fuckin video game//

I could see your future and it aint no record labels
A job at a low class resturaunt trying to set the tables nigga who set your goals better yet who set your fables//

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*fables-a fictitious narrative or statement
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Old 10-01-05, 10:12 PM   #6
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Dis mo'fucka got all his wins off newbies.....dawgs straight herbin it lmao


dis guy is not serious im straight herbing it wtf.........u must be outta ur mind......uppin 4 dis shyt
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Old 10-01-05, 10:24 PM   #7
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^yo dawg for future reference...just hit quote....saves time..and looks prettier lol...and y up it if its at the top? ne ways...............
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Old 10-01-05, 10:38 PM   #8
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I'm tired of you talking about you claiming you can rap-
When all you talk about is hoes, money, and things you wont dare to grab//
i give this a 7.5/10 i didnt really feel this

HIV is the only thing about you that's positive
Stop your lyrics cause they getting norrogitive//
8/10 good punch i really liked this line

Jersey City, Nj Is my hometown the realest niggas you will ever see
But in beantown, you posing niggas, yall wanna be me//
9/10--had good punch on this he took a shot at ur hometown...

I've seen mad fake niggas in beantown and i think its lame
Ya'll so fictionated you look like a fuckin video game//
8.5/10--nice i liked this line...this is my favirote

I could see your future and it aint no record labels
A job at a low class resturaunt trying to set the tables nigga who set your goals better yet who set your fables//
8/10--good closer....nice way to use your multi

overall: 41%


Dawg you battle newbies religiously,im given you a beatin
Another easy win , these battles should be considered cheatin
i give this a 8/10...nice punch

I stop and laugh ,you throwing a punch is hard to see
On a battle site, still aint trhown a punch...ya whole verse dont diss me
this line is always being used now...5/10

Ya rap skill, nah man ya lack skill..dawg seriously your a herb
Try n rap wit a verb..Smack tha shit out you plant ya face on a curb
7/10...its was ok....ehhh

Ill end this battle with your structure, so its a close race
Shit now I suck ass, this structure to rap is a big disgrace
5/10 bad closer was not feeling it at all....

overall: 25%

vote goes to tha notorious for he had better flow structure n punches......
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Old 10-01-05, 10:49 PM   #9
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gud lukin out u got any open battles so i cud RTF...?? i seached but no but just post the link
uppin 1-0 c'mon....i want dis shyt to finish
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Old 10-02-05, 09:10 AM   #10
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this battle was weak as hell for real and i swear i didn't see a single proper punch in this.....all attempts at punches ended up coming across as statemnets n shit so that aint good.

wyteknyte you seriously need to reconsider if you're intending on coninuing to write rhymes because that was pathetic

notorious d i didnt like the way you majorly stretched your last line, that fucked up your whole flow for real but as i actually saw a couple attempts at punches i'll give this to you as it seemed that you were actually tryna make your punches connect....didnt work though but you blatantly put the most effort into your verse

v/notorious d
 
Old 10-02-05, 10:30 AM   #11
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na man i forgot to indent dis was supposed to be a mutli but w.e i forgot but yea ayo dont you think youre a little to new to RV to be telling people that shit w.e uppin for dis shyt
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Old 10-03-05, 10:29 AM   #12
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na man i forgot to indent dis was supposed to be a mutli but w.e i forgot but yea ayo dont you think youre a little to new to RV to be telling people that shit w.e uppin for dis shyt


fool please you seriously have no idea who your talking to.....
anyway i would merk you and never forget it
 
Old 10-03-05, 04:22 PM   #13
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fool please you seriously have no idea who your talking to.....
anyway i would merk you and never forget it

lmao but your losing to a newb!!!!!!i was peeping dat....lol just leave my site man u pathetic
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Old 10-02-05, 11:59 AM   #14
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Old 10-02-05, 04:05 PM   #15
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this is simply pathetic, his verse has no punches......anyway uppin
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