Ooooh at the new graphic.

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"A pot" of gold for this leprecaun, small wins with simple words,
But his luck has ran out, and crashed faster then a tire off the curb.
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Wordplay, name is green (leprecaun), leprecauns = lucky, tires crash
down after hitting a curb. His luck ran out. Is it that hard?

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you fell off, its easy to see that im ownin ya, dog see
when this rev drops, ill just push my car over his body

apots was actually decent... when u re-read it, it makes sense... this one was hard for me... first i thought rev's was good but the ending about a tire was kinda odd to me... i think apot edged this one out
V/ Apotropaic

Rev was too technical,in my opinion.

And I don't like it when people have to explain shit in order for the other person toget it anymore...

v/Apotropiac..

I hate to give this to Apot cuz Car/Rev nameplays are sooo played. However, Rev's was just so forced and explained that it wasn't good at all.

Vote - Apotropaic

vote Apotropaic better punch

v/apple, I mean apo

OH SHIT

Im gonna whore you with that concept if we ever get matched up.

Voted for Apotropaic

The Rev, I didn't really like the whole leprechaun play on his name because it is green, that's like saying its cool to come in and use a sunlight play on your name because it is yellow. And then taking it to a car tire off the curb/ crashing concept just seemed like you were heading in a different direction and that part to the second line didn't really work with the leprechaun concept.

Apo, your punch was kinda basic, and you had a real played nameplay on The Rev...but your's was actually an easily identifiable nameplay, and it had a mild bit of humour. Also the fact that it was not necessary for you to explain your punch made it better.

V/ - Apotropaic

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"A pot" of gold for this leprecaun, small wins with simple words,
But his luck has ran out, and crashed faster then a tire off the curb.
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Wordplay, name is green (leprecaun), leprecauns = lucky, tires crash
down after hitting a curb. His luck ran out. Is it that hard?
^^why explain it then? But nah, this is way too forced, and not really harsh at all anyway


you fell off, its easy to see that im ownin ya, dog see
when this rev drops, ill just push my car over his body
^^not really effective logical connection between revs and car but this is more direct than your opponent's

v/Apo

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

v/ apo

better punch

Wordplay, name is green (leprecaun), leprecauns = lucky, tires crash
down after hitting a curb. His luck ran out. Is it that hard?

^^ must be if you have to explain it that much and then ask that question lol...

you fell off, its easy to see that im ownin ya, dog see
when this rev drops, ill just push my car over his body
wasnt that good but good enough for the win

v/ Apotropaic

nice punch imo...

took me a minute to get revs punch

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