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Old 12-12-05, 05:40 PM   #1
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13. Mr. Key vs. 14. Narc-Uzi

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Old 12-12-05, 06:42 PM   #2
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Old 12-14-05, 06:09 PM   #3
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yea............................................... ..............
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Old 12-15-05, 07:00 PM   #4
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Ill Tattoo "Narc Wins" On My Dick So I Can Put Words In keys Mouth
Cause His Songs Are "Photosensitive" Cuz They Will Never Come Out

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Old 12-16-05, 11:59 PM   #5
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^^^Look at his diss to Living Legends in his sig, lol

You'll get wrecked quick, this whore'll be my next bitch
Why should I bother to try? When ur puttin choruses in a TEXT diss
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Old 12-17-05, 12:02 AM   #6
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wack battle...... i honestly cant decide
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Old 12-17-05, 12:17 AM   #7
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Umm, I think this is really easy to decide actually. Who puts a chorus in a text diss? lol. The photosensitive concept I just wasn't feeling.

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Old 12-17-05, 08:25 AM   #8
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Ill Tattoo "Narc Wins" On My Dick So I Can Put Words In keys Mouth
Cause His Songs Are "Photosensitive" Cuz They Will Never Come Out

^First line was corny.Punch was decent.

You'll get wrecked quick, this whore'll be my next bitch
Why should I bother to try? When ur puttin choruses in a TEXT diss

^Nice multis..I've always thought about using a line like this in the past,just never did.I really don't know why people put choruses in text shit..LoL.

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Old 12-17-05, 08:29 AM   #9
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V./ Key. .
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Old 12-17-05, 11:25 AM   #10
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v/mr. key, haha, fucking choruses...plus narc's set up was just friggen gaaaay
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Old 12-17-05, 11:54 AM   #11
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narc's concept wasn't that great, key's personal was pretty cool.

v/mr. key
 
Old 12-17-05, 12:18 PM   #12
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narcs concept was misworded, keys personal was pretty weak cuz i ve seen choruses in text plenty but i still get the point
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Old 12-17-05, 03:11 PM   #13
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blah, v/mr. key

narc was wack

key had one of those "it's funny cuz it's true" type lines
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Old 12-17-05, 05:04 PM   #14
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welll i personally thought both were complete shit....... but narc had some wit..... so he gets my vote.... cuz i really dont see the problem of puttin choruses into any text disses/songs/etc...... maybe its just me, lol
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Old 12-17-05, 05:24 PM   #15
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^I think your in to deep with this text thing then, Ive done plenty of OM disses, but text isnt rap, some see it as a form of it, but its not rap and his diss wasnt a track so a chorus looks dumb with it. But yea, i can admitt I dropped weak, like I said in my punch,why should I bother to try?

Thanks everyone for voting though, Ill hit up all of your battles when I get from the movies tonite. 1
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