Hook:
I gotta live it up today, cause tomoro could be my last.
You talkin perserverance, not a part of my past.
The world as we know it, is wasted searchin for signs.
I can feel the fading of hopes that I hold in my mind.

Verse(1):
Workin this 5 to 9 grave shift, is no longer do-able.
Its cruisal i calm down 'for i break the fuck out this cubicle.
I feel like a juvinal & they wanna call this box an office.
& Im still yet to receive the raise my boss had promised.
This is not usual, my problem aint even pharmacudical.
Its like that somber you feel, while attendin a funeral.
See the blurr in my cudicle, well symbolizes my salary.
Im close to quiting but even closer to assaullt & battery.
Well actually, the hand stands at the 8 on the clock.
Means an hour 'til im homebound, thank God for the block.
Yea thank God for the block, for the fiends & cracker jacks.
& I gotta love the hood for puttin 23's on my cadillac.
Relaxed on my porch, watchin shorties pass in high heels.
Witta blunt, I forget about work...cause the high heals.
& the time kills, I climb into bed & count all of my sins.
My eyes open at 15 to 5 & i do it all over again.

& im dreamin about the weekend.

Hook:(x2)

Verse(2) Drakel:

they way that we look at it, i just wanna forget it
sure not everyone has a cell phone, but its a larger percentage
i'd rather have 3 meals a day, n'feeling replenished
than spending the money on clothes, and later regretin it
thats just the way i think, i'm all about livin'
most of the shots i take, i aim to be missin'
cause too many have died already, nobody's thinkin'
i'd rather be up early, than not have any birds singin'
to take a walk in the morning, enjoying the scenery
not looking around because sirens are screaming
see, i want a world of peace, if that even exists
its okay to wage a war, but not use your fists?
because a gun settles everything, the whole country claps
its makes for a compelling story, but what about the other half?
with what their teaching today, i'm suprized i've survived
but that's what makes me so glad to be alive

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2605156

the link...i dont wanna be closed again.

It's two links bro.

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Blow It - Topical

yay!!! nice verse po, this wasn't too shab

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what does two links mean?

Gotcha later today man. Headin' for work in about 5 minutes.

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Blow It - Topical

bump .

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buppity uppin'n shit

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Drak why you bumping Po'Its peice? and Drop another link or this will be closed

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how about get more active

this is our piece, and go look around the forum, i leave feed on shit everyday...stop being a gay mod and stfu.

thats all you can friggen say, is "leave 2 links"...

once again, stfu.

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Close It Then...Nobody Feeds On This Site...Nobody.

People do, when they get time... I'm not gona drop feedback on a piece that's gona get closed though, that would be pointless. And you complain about feed, yet you don't leave any yourself... The very reason it's getting closed.

I'm confused.

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Blow It - Topical

Hook:
I gotta live it up today, cause tomoro could be my last.
You talkin perserverance, not a part of my past.
The world as we know it, is wasted searchin for signs.
I can feel the fading of hopes that I hold in my mind.

looove the hook... nice drop man

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OptimisticallyGenius

no problem, po it. made the hook, she is quite talented

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good flow.. some nice vocabs.. some good concepts... yeah fine structure....cool multies

yeah this is a pretty deep piece fosho. good writing

pz