man when i spit it's fire
don't be acting like you is fly
man when i spit it's fire
i be taking out your fucking left eye
man when i spit it's fire
don't try and say you a ride ta die
man when spit it's fire
but you don't know how im ending you life

when i spit you know it's hotter
you put the low into your low rider
i put the i into the word fighter
better realize that im a spider
you just a fly caught in my wire
you just another guy i had to hire
telling me my lerics is what inspires
thats why im giving your girl desire
call me ice cube i put it out the fire

yo i be spittin fire
do you wanna know what it's like to get hot
cuz when i spit its fire
don't care if you believe me or not
cuz when i spit it's fire
set the flame to a pair of your socks

i be the one that be drinking liqure
there can't be no one that hit much quicker
like a bomb you just triped my trigger
semi automatic when i shoot it whispers
patato cut out to silence the shifter
i knew i would have to get wit her
didn't mean to knock boots wit your sister
i catch her sitting out wit her girlfriends
i didn't know i would be her brest friend
so many hoes man i had her gaspin
took a picture cuz she be flashin
soon enough dawg i had her ass end
stick it in her but as she relaxin
reach out my hand and start a smack
listen to the ass cuz she be clappin
suckin on those tities milk be blastin
knew she was pregnant so forget the strappin
little baby girl how did this shit happen

yo when i spit it's fire
your sister be havin my kid
yo when i spit it's fire
can't believe on what i just did
yo when i spit it's fire
got me a moniter to handle the sidds

yo sidds is what kills children
give em breath so they lungs is fillin
you start to bug when you thinks it's killin
ain't nomore going to parties staying out an chillin
what can i do can you be real then
thats the same shit i just keep hearin
just like a virus there is no curiin
life or death dawg which one you fearin
if you had to die would it be to day
if you had a band would it be 2 gay
marcuz huston sportting b2k
but you doin it all the wrong way

yo when i spit its fire
didn't you know this was the end of my song
yo when i spit it's fire
if you ain't know that i be to strong
when i spit it's fire
just like vietnam i be droppin a bomb
when i spit it's fire
everyone sit down and try to remain calm

uppin...............uppin........................u ppin...........................uppin.............. ............uppin.................uppin........... ....uppin...............uppin.............

very generic.

you need to focus alot more on dropping original topica and even try some storyline shit.

your rhymes and rhyme scheme are very basic, try multis.


keep dropping.

-Y's-

uppin for feedback uppin for feedback hit me back playas

Two links, you know this, you've been told before. You're lucky im not mod here.

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Blow It - Topical

lmfao at window shopper beat when its text lmfao

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216695
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218998

you right scratch the windo shopper beat just imagine a beat that it can go to lol