Yo, maybe ive mastered certain aspects of this rap game
But it seems you gotta say you blast techs to attract fame
Or at least say that you have mad sex and a fat chain
All i hear is rappers spittin whack shit the exact same
Way, and the mainstreams claimin these tame streets
Repetative lyrics are gettin mixed with the same beats
Producers see these emcees as only a cashcrop
So they turn em into puppets just to make em their jackpot
Record label executives dont even know what a record is
I reckon its, cause they only care how big of a check it gets
It's pathetic, its, takin the sport outta rap
I watch BET and it leaves me, bored its so whack
But these talentless rappers keep makin their mountains of money
If i shock you at 17 you'll be astounded at 20.

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oh aight,i was going to tell you you was wack since you disrespected my shit ,but your was actually good even though i wanted to tell you

**fuck you***

but one negative thing i can say about it is why make a topic about being wack and then going to everybody saying how wack their verse was

oh yea,and its whateva
battle me if you think im so wack

Wait, i dont understand. If i told you your verse was whack, then it probably was... You said yourself you wanted to tell me my verse was whack, but it's not... Cause im not whack... Bye.

no matter how wack you say i am ,im better than you

But how can that be? Your just so, whack.

battle me than ,

Topical then... Enter my arena.

damn i see im not da only 1 gettin hated...lol i jus say fuck hataz

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my first battle since comin back 2 rv

lyrical hustla dont sleep rv

if i reply 2 ya post return da love heres my links

this was ight for some socially conscious shit. and its true on alotta occasions so it some real talk. but the ish on bet is just singles mah dude. you can't judge an artist by that alone ya feel me.
ya flow as on point

this was my favorite bar

Record label executives dont even know what a record is
I reckon its, cause they only care how big of a check it gets
^^ thats some real shit right there.. but be easy n holl bac kat me on my shit

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

its ight...flow i aint feeling too much..i dunno if i could picture this to a beat
the vocab needs ta be upped kinda basic
what u speakin is real though.its what u truly feel about rap
this was ok coulda been better...i'll give it a 5.5/10
mainly cuz it was kinda short too so keep trying

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wasnt that bad work on the werdplay and flow and the rymes so far ur not that bad and u can werk on that man g/l and plus yes the rap game how it is is pretty wack but thats y ur here is to make it to be famous

flow was ok but tha lines were plain as fuck.....read first four and stopped



































boringgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg gg
felt wut u was sayin ............but your style just was wack.... lines were too simple....an rymes were basic..good structure but other than wut u said it wasnt good

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Man im hittin it with 6 syllable rhymes it aint my fault if you cant see that.