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01-05-07, 08:30 PM | #1 | ||
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[New Track!] GangGreen: 2 Way Street
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01-05-07, 08:31 PM | #2 | ||
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Links Commin, ....
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01-05-07, 08:34 PM | #3 | ||
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01-05-07, 08:36 PM | #4 | ||
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01-05-07, 11:30 PM | #5 | ||
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Uppin For Some Feed,....`1
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01-05-07, 11:39 PM | #6 | |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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you look good
vocals are way too loud flwo is on but ti isnt too smooth sounds like your reading it off of the paper i like this second guys voice sounds kinda sexy flow is better than the first guys vocals are loud too
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01-06-07, 12:40 AM | #7 | ||
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word aint that a spontane beat. oh well beats ill...your vocals way to loud dude...flow is decent it's a little rough, you could done it a bit more smoothly. your lyrics are cool, real talk n what not. you shoulda put some vocals on the hook..short adlibs or somin like that and it'd be coo. 2nd verse is a bit better, I'm likin ya flow a little more. overall the track is decent, not really somin I'd bump. I think you coulda done a better job with it.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...113#post3132113
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01-06-07, 01:14 AM | #8 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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I like the beat...this is what Ike and I are gonna rip
ur flow is a lil jerky on this beat... lyrics are real soundin tho Love is a key to a man's heart? I thought it was the stomach! decent track...jus need to polish ur flow and mixing 1 |
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