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Glory Of God...
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The Glory of god is like the sky nights at night/
god is always near you, not really far out of sight/ He is always there for you, in times of need and depression/ learn to go by his rules, of anti-sin and confession/ Many different ways in life, gods way is a must/ its the only way to heaven, live off the words "In God We Trust"/ God is Life, Love, Beuty and Joy, you will be punished in the afterlife if you abandon him like a toy/ God is there for you no-matter what, he is always reliable/ Go by his rules, love him, and live of the bible/ Live like a disciple, live with jesus and be kind/ Droppin religious lyrics as my brain and tounge unwind/ I am sorry God, for i truly sinned/ but i promise to believe in you in this chaotic wirlwind/ I still love you but i fell like im going insane/ lovin you with all my heart, why do i feel pain?/ My life is gettin blurry, its scary i swear/ starting to have second thoughts...are you really there?/ I always prayed to you, and the bible, I read/ Then why is this gun suddenly attached to my head?............... Hey ya'll postin this for ya'll plz comment on it i really took my time and put a lot of emotion in it, hope i get some responds. peace out. |
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uppin for votes yall
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this was good i liked it alot
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aite thx eviley im still trying to find ures lol
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Uppin fo' votes yall!
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Well I think the ending was kind of shacky. Maybe if you were to do something more with that last line. Other than that ths is off the meat rack! I was fellin it
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thx phantasia apprieciate ure comment.
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Light Weight
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This one was good. The ending, I'm not too sure about. I really liked that first paragraph though.
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k thx legendary appricieate the comment
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It was nice read..so i liked it..keep doin what u do
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aite keep hittin up them replies
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