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Old 05-10-03, 01:18 AM   #1
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Glory Of God...

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The Glory of god is like the sky nights at night/
god is always near you, not really far out of sight/
He is always there for you, in times of need and depression/
learn to go by his rules, of anti-sin and confession/
Many different ways in life, gods way is a must/
its the only way to heaven, live off the words "In God We Trust"/

God is Life, Love, Beuty and Joy, you will be punished in the afterlife if you abandon him like a toy/
God is there for you no-matter what, he is always reliable/
Go by his rules, love him, and live of the bible/
Live like a disciple, live with jesus and be kind/
Droppin religious lyrics as my brain and tounge unwind/

I am sorry God, for i truly sinned/
but i promise to believe in you in this chaotic wirlwind/
I still love you but i fell like im going insane/
lovin you with all my heart, why do i feel pain?/
My life is gettin blurry, its scary i swear/
starting to have second thoughts...are you really there?/
I always prayed to you, and the bible, I read/
Then why is this gun suddenly attached to my head?...............

Hey ya'll postin this for ya'll plz comment on it i really took my time and put a lot of emotion in it, hope i get some responds.

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Old 05-10-03, 01:19 AM   #2
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uppin for votes yall
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Old 05-10-03, 01:27 AM   #3
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this was good i liked it alot
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Old 05-10-03, 01:28 AM   #4
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aite thx eviley im still trying to find ures lol
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Old 05-10-03, 01:29 AM   #5
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Uppin fo' votes yall!
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Old 05-10-03, 08:43 PM   #6
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Well I think the ending was kind of shacky. Maybe if you were to do something more with that last line. Other than that ths is off the meat rack! I was fellin it
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Old 05-10-03, 10:29 PM   #7
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thx phantasia apprieciate ure comment.

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Old 05-10-03, 10:50 PM   #8
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This one was good. The ending, I'm not too sure about. I really liked that first paragraph though.
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Old 05-11-03, 04:28 PM   #9
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k thx legendary appricieate the comment

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Old 05-13-03, 10:32 PM   #10
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It was nice read..so i liked it..keep doin what u do
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Old 05-14-03, 12:30 AM   #11
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aite keep hittin up them replies
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