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Life Without A Mom...
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I never had a mom, always was home alone, felt weak in the bone/
didnt have a mother to love, or to depend on and trust/ why i grew up bad, with rust and a gun to bust/ i grew up like a wild animal, killin niggas like hannibal/ wonderin if there is a god, and what my life in for/ Not havin a mom, literally makes ure heart sore/ then i tore, all the pain away, went astray and live in the streets/ nothin to do but make lyrics and beats/ Dont know waht a mom is, what the hell do they do?/ nothin for me and you, pretty soon imma get shot up too/ always wanted a mother who would be there for love at my side/ my father lied, couldnt take it so he ran and commited suicide/ this story is all true and thats wahts to sad/ had a dad,and some heats , grew up bad,in the streets/ this is the story from my prespective, life is like a living hell/ gettin shot up with a gun shell, goin down to hell, fallin in a dark hole, cuz my soul's a lump a coal/ aint got nothin to life for, hearts torn up and sore, livin on a dirt floor, now theres nothin to live for/ you heard me right by all the stuff i said, now i got a gat stuck pointed at my head..... aite tell me what ya think bout this one, did it kinda quick along time ago uppin for replies on improvements -OuT- |
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deep shit dawg, liked it a lot,
flowed well: always wanted a mother who would be there for love at my side/ my father lied, couldnt take it so he ran and commited suicide/ - tight!!! |
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IP:
wow thx Ryth ill keep spittin man.
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IP:
yeah that was deep... I feel tha same thing about that... I liked good flow...
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IP:
thx din ill keep it up and im feelin ya sig
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IP:
you can tell it can from your heart. thats what its all about..
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aite thx IRR for the comment
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i gotta admitt man, that deff. had some emotion. but i totally understood it considerin i aint got a dad..and my moms a complete bitch never there fo me...but all in all that was reall good
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IP:
thx K i fell for ya
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IP:
This was probrably some deepness for those who never
had a mom, but i have mine, So you know i can't really say how it would be without one.. but i'm pretty sure this is some deepness For those who never had one.. keep uppin B! |
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IP:
Thx Man, wow im gettin good props for this.
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uppin for comments on this and my other open mic hit
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IP:
Wow, this was really good. Like one of the other replies said, you can tell it's from your heart. Keep posting more like this.
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aite will do legendary.
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