|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
|
|||||||
| View Poll Results: u pick | |||
| like it |
  
|
2 | 66.67% |
| hate it |
  
|
1 | 33.33% |
| Voters: 3. You may not vote on this poll | |||
 |
|
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread | Display Modes |
12-30-03, 10:42 PM
|
#16
|
|||||||
|
young mike-young bangers-
|
IP: C1DA C961
..............more thoughts please.......................
__________________
JR.delinquents |
|||||||
|
|
|
12-30-03, 10:53 PM
|
#17
|
||||||
|
Guest
|
IP: 399E F0FD
Its Iight... Its A Good Piece I Guess... Some Lines Seemed To Be Fillers and Some Seem To Hit Really Hard On The Topic...It Flowed Well And All of That So I Guess I'll Give You 7 MICS/10
RETURN THE FAVOR Peep Life Style |
||||||
|
|
|
12-30-03, 11:12 PM
|
#18
|
|||||||
|
young mike-young bangers-
|
IP: C1DA C961
iight good lookin still taken more thoughts
__________________
JR.delinquents |
|||||||
|
|
|
|
12-31-03, 11:36 AM
|
#19
|
|||||||
|
young mike-young bangers-
|
IP: 4577 CD9A
more thoughts i wanna no if its hot or if its not
__________________
JR.delinquents |
|||||||
|
|
|
|
12-31-03, 11:45 AM
|
#20
|
||||
|
Free Agent
|
IP: 1E3A 659B
Could have been structured better, but i liked it..... I think ya did well on the writing....
5.6/10
__________________
B.E.S.T The Comeback ||Sonny Barz! - The Middle Weight 1-2 Punchline Champion||SickHead.||Fly-E||Antonio Banderas|  Mystic (Traitor)
|
||||
|
|
|
12-31-03, 11:47 AM
|
#21
|
|||||||
|
young mike-young bangers-
|
IP: 4577 CD9A
good lookin thank you keeping it real more thoughts please
__________________
JR.delinquents |
|||||||
|
|
|
|
12-31-03, 11:19 PM
|
#22
|
|||||||
|
young mike-young bangers-
|
IP: 399E F0FD
dont sleep on this
__________________
JR.delinquents |
|||||||
|
|
|
|
12-31-03, 11:23 PM
|
#23
|
|||
|
A King Missing a Queen...
|
IP: 8D7B 43DF
Its aight, you show some potential in this. I dont like how you set up the rap. Maybe be more open minded, and creative. Imagery will only make you better, just remember that. I thought it was aight. But it didnt really apeal to me...
Return the favor and peep my Open Mic... " Remember Our Love "
__________________
 Sig created by "Tha Sick One..." CRHYME SINDICATE Open Mic Drops -Defying The Odds- Higher Thinking League Record 2-0 High Class vs Tweety ( semifinals match) |
|||
|
|
|
01-01-04, 01:11 AM
|
#24
|
|||||||
|
young mike-young bangers-
|
IP: 399E F0FD
honest i likr it
__________________
JR.delinquents |
|||||||
|
|
|
|
01-01-04, 02:01 AM
|
#25
|
|||||||
|
young mike-young bangers-
|
IP: C1DA C961
more thoughts
__________________
JR.delinquents |
|||||||
|
|
|
|
01-01-04, 12:03 PM
|
#26
|
|||||||
|
young mike-young bangers-
|
IP: C1DA C961
???????more thoughts???????
__________________
JR.delinquents |
|||||||
|
|
|
|
01-01-04, 12:58 PM
|
#27
|
||||
|
Half Lyricist/Half King
|
IP: C1DA C961
It was ok I'll go wit High Class in saying it has potential, but when u want 2 me and you can do a collaboration sometime dawg, welll hit me up
__________________
<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>  |
||||
|
|
|
01-01-04, 01:50 PM
|
#28
|
||||
|
Mass Apeal
|
IP: 399E F0FD
I liked the topic, and I was feelin' the flow, it would of probably been better if you made it longer. Also work on your structure, and vocab a bit, other-wise it was okay.
|
||||
|
|
|
01-01-04, 03:33 PM
|
#29
|
|||||||
|
young mike-young bangers-
|
IP: 4577 CD9A
yeah dawg well get a clabiratin soon cause i got 2 years over my head i need to think
__________________
JR.delinquents |
|||||||
|
|
|
|
01-01-04, 03:36 PM
|
#30
|
||||||
|
Guest
|
IP: 65E8 9804
yo man i liked dis piece u know...got me tihnking bout missin u by puff back in da day....its short yeh but its nice....i think tha hook lets it down though u know...i reckon if u worked on making tha verse longer, and work on a few more and dat hook, dis wud be hot
|
||||||
|
|
|
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
