sum ish i key'd up freestylin wit ma crew.......

This lack of communication is killin a nation, thats what sparked off this creation--
like a gas station, dont spark-shit or u will get blown-up -
and like an elevator i will surely show-u-up, or take-u-down, what goes around comes around-
and if u cant swim then u about to drown--
you hear the sound? fuck nah, cuz this shits text-
but still i'll bust a sick flow that'll get yall vexed-
who wants some? who wants Next?, if coke fucks u up this mix of lyrix'll get u wrecked--
I got u in check, pinpoint, snipered down in ma scope-
do u got hope? cuz up against me, do u think u can really cope?--
I'm similar to the pope, cuz i've been touched-by-god -
see i spit lightnin out ma mouth always endin wit iron rods--
I aint a fellon, but ma flows bring armageddon, u get a lyrikal tellin, but i aint yellin, cuz when theres more than me! theres rebellin---

shit was free'd in 5-8 min, feedback plz.........

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up'n.....

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Sounds like a freestyle...Good if it is...If it isnt a freestyle you need to Elevate. It's quite hard to free with text unless its on messenger or something.

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Blow It - Topical

^^^thnx 4 feedback, i'll check ya skripts son....

messenger
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yup, u guessed it.......lol, crazy keystyle cyphers n shit,lol...

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yo this was sick i like how you alwayz rhyme more than 2 or 3 times in 1 line thats sick..and u doin ur thang this was a nice freestyle right here i was feelin' it

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KiLlAh BwOy

hey can yall vote at my bsttle against da jazz jus need two mo votes

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merked list: spiky2k8, da jazz, young jigga, hoping to beat many other membaz

1. tha gilla teen :whooped that nigga
2. spiky 2k8 (2) :thats was a funny battle
3. da jazz :easy ass win also funny battle
4. young jigga :fun battles althought i won easyly
5. youndkd33: that bitch was a whiner about lines oh well i still win

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Muthafucka, WHAT R U DOIN IN MY THREAD? get the fuck outta here, witcha no replyin vote pryin bitch ass.......i should rip u up......

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up'n

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