ayt im new here so dont hate or make fun besides i probly got more skill than ya school english teacher at this shit......oh n so u niggaz n niggets kno my real name is allik war dis jus my flip side...hahahahahahaaa


by allik war:

yo its allik war,time 2 spit sum metaphors,4 da fans who wantin me more,than wut n e rapper could afford//im nasty i might fuck in truck,for a couple of bucks,n kick a whore out as soon as i bust//trust dis u dont want no part in dis,im an artist,slash arcinist burnin ur house down while ur shoppin at toys r us//im sick n twisted,like da bottle of cris i pissed in,im back again//fuck da law,ill cram my cock in da govenor's jaw,get her high from da crack in her drawer's//go public,tell da bitch 2 open my profit,b4 i stab her in da arm pits//
fuckin wit me,will have u stuck in da middle like 3's company,cuz im da newest mc,n im attackin ur children like flees,n bees stingin dey eye balls til they swell beggin 2 breath//u couldnt see me,cuz im jus a gust of vapor caught in da breeze,tellin ur mother get on her knees//im blowin up spots like dalmations,fuck up ur whole crews relations,n convence 2 masturbation//
sick rhyme,from my fucked up mind,every time,i grip a mic dat send chills down ya neck breakin ya spine//2 egotistic,2 b fuck wit,stubbern bitch,wit plans 2 get pussy n become rich//lyrics deeply inbeded in my flows,get even da most stuck up hoes,suckin my toes//watch out 4 a murder,cuz im comin through ur stereo 2 burgularize ur house n killin u,muthafuckas like where does he brew dis shit up from,i answer back wit a gallon of cum,taste da new flavor n peep where its comin from//i stay on top of da flow like dish washer
liquid,niggaz wish they could perfect my method,but i aint da nigga 2 b tested,cuz i dont give a fuck if i get arested,cuz cops can get it 2 i jus thought i would mention,so b smart dont tlk n maybe u'll enjoy ur pension//

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i feel that verse..but it dont shake me at all.....hehe...i'll still whoop u in a battle..trust me boo....love ya....
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1 word for ya boo amature....lmmaoo love ya boo in ya dreams only ma

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lol....ima smack down ya horn...if u get what i mean...the day is about to come....then you gon lick my feet.....lol.....

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wut does a guy gotta do 2 recieve feed back i see peeps readin it but no replies shit i aint weak i can take constructive criticizim shit hit me up rate me sum 1 fuck thanx

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stop turning this into a sex chat room wit Miss. Cleo and put it up on Ur sig as a link then battle people. slowly they'll come and check it out. U should work on Ur structure and metaphore, vocab, and pun...... fuck it, do the whole thing over actually. no beef just my opinion.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

dats pretty funny thanx for da constructive criticism but i dont need dont hate u wish u were as good as me dats a weak flow n e ways i got my verse 2 da battle up now we wait 4 votes n i aint makin dis a blind date love column so dont b jeolous i got sum n u dont no beef its jus music oh bout da link shit how da fuck u do it? help me since u wanna b so hint of n constructive wit criticism thanx peace out 1

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