what happend that night? u really wan kno?
aight dog sit a minute peep the flow

it was 2am and cold as fuck
me and my boys decided he was outta luck

so we got ready and puffed a blunt
poured up some hen n planned the stunt

we decided we do it nice n fast
the drive by would happen now at last

2 cars deep, windows down guns cocked
now we ready to shoot down yo block

i toldem wait till u see my ak start to sting
then get ready to let yo toastas sing

i can say now that boy finally learned his lession
that night he wouldent of lived even wit gods blessin

...haha jus a lil verse i did in like 5 min, leave some shit on what u think peace

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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB
-crunchy blac(three 6 mafia)


i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged
-styles p(the lox)

u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice
-I 20

hey make ur shit longer fuck... makin shit longer can help in some battlez...

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I agree, for what it was it was ok

But make ya bars longer and more in depth, with a name like drive by you could have made this into a dfope story track .... If ya gets what im saying....

ALso you should use a wider vocab and use of wordplay and you will be straight....

Not bad
Go peep some of my shit

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I am Here To Save You All

word to dat aand wus up ice yo man i voted on a battle of urz and i asked you to retrun the fave so could you find it in urself to do that...lol pz...

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This is allright. But you need to drop longer more in depth peice's. For what this is it isnt too bad. But you could do much better.
Try a more original topic.Instead of doing a drive by.
If you do these sort's of topic's try using more emotion and imagry.
For 5 minute drop this is good. But try dropping peice's that you took more time to work on.That way your full talent will start to shine.
overall 6/10......
keep dropping....
pz

aye mayn i did something like this already why you put drive by that bittin hommie me and Scenario made tha original

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no beef tho its koo no doubt its all good hommie

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i aint bittin shit, yea yo and project pat made a drive by song to....so i guess every one is bittin everyone? lol but yee whateva, uppin

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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB
-crunchy blac(three 6 mafia)


i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged
-styles p(the lox)

u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice
-I 20

uPppPpppPpppPPPPp

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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB
-crunchy blac(three 6 mafia)


i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged
-styles p(the lox)

u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice
-I 20

........upppppppppPPPPPppPPPPPPPp

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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB
-crunchy blac(three 6 mafia)


i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged
-styles p(the lox)

u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice
-I 20

upppppppppPPPPPppPPPPPPPppppppppppPPPPPppPPPPPPPp

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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB
-crunchy blac(three 6 mafia)


i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged
-styles p(the lox)

u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice
-I 20

yup again......tooo basic but ur getin there.....try using better and more detail words....and get some metaz and multies in there.........keep elevatin!