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Malefic 5 100.00%
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Old 10-13-04, 03:37 PM   #16
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Old 10-13-04, 06:03 PM   #17
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Voted For: Malefic

u had beter punches without doubt
u had better personals
u had a better flow
ur structure was also better dope work on that structure itll help ur flow alot and up the vocab both
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Old 10-13-04, 07:23 PM   #18
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Voted For: Malefic

Malefic won this battle bcuz his punches hit harder and structure was good. Dopeman's verse was pretty corny, didnt flow well at all, n the punches didnt hit very hard. only one good bar from him about the church steeples. so malefic takes this battle
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Old 10-13-04, 07:30 PM   #19
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couldnt agree more...
ya got the win malefic, i came weak, good job
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Old 10-13-04, 07:30 PM   #20
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Yea you won this due to having better punches simply.
More direct and you connected with 2 good bars.
Nothing over average.. pretty much average.
Not bad tho.. a lot better what I've seen on here.

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Old 10-13-04, 09:15 PM   #21
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Uppin.
Thanks for votes.
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Old 10-14-04, 05:13 PM   #22
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The Council?...DopeMan?...and Welcome to the south?
Whats it mean? Your O-town self is an Empire Scout!
Im like your title there son....and your KRS-ONE..
Lookin up for talent, but like your town, there is Nun(0-town)
Dope?...Nope...Kid your a highlight realm full of bloopers-
An the best one was when you actually called urself Trooper
Please, Droppin verse you, It's like a DMV with no cone's
I tear the muscle out your mouth, an spit thru ur jaw bone
End your wit's wit spit...to leave fucked like pink lips
Readin ur lyrics, so-stretched- it's like my CPU-skipped

^all original lines in this battle, with the O-town, lol... only thing that kinda fell off was the last bar.. best bar: was the one with the DMV with no cones, creative.. and funny, nice malefic...

dope is ''coming for ya''...
the ''deep within'' cant do nothin for ya..*1*
u can run, u can hide, or even duck, man my punches still gon fuck you up..
fat bitch you got wide load on ya huge ass like the back of a truck...*2*
u aint gotta worry bout my flow, check your heart beat...
cause off one bar i'm eatin at u like u'd eat ur lunch meat..!*3*
''no surrender an no retreat'' so my texts will 'dilute' you an ya 'peoples'..
no messin, gettin straight to the point with the disses like a churches steeple..*4*
ya out for the count an nobody can be ya hero...
so add a 1 to ya record inplace of zero..*5*
ya gettin burnt like nero an this aint even a cd...
to make it official i'ma t-bagg ya eyes so u really can never ''see-me''..! *6*
^ur structure was messed up in this battle.. sum of ur lines were played the church and the steeple comin' to a point.. and the dilute and peoples portions, the opener was terrible i have no idea what u were thinkin' puttin' that as a opener.. this shit was like a newbie-challenged verse or sumthin' (being honest).. the closer was the only portion that was aight.. everything else was crappy.. u basically didn't come hard enuff, dopeman, malefic took the punches and structure and personals sum what... that's my vote, malefic...
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