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10-25-04, 07:02 PM
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bringin' new thoughts to the name disability-flossed in tight wear shiny shoes you feelin' me
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[FONT=Arial Black]HALLUCINATIONS[/FONT]
IP: 0BF5 0FDF
GIVE ME SOME POSITIVE CRITICISM, RATE THIS: CREATIVITY-FLOW-WORDS-WORD PLAY-OVERALL.
do you believe in the sand man, fairy's or spirits/ those are the reasons i wear a cross around my neck, you best believe it/ some call it a "holy war" not the one on t.v./ the one with angels and demons, the war over me/ spontanious combustion, poof you gone/ is it from the sun bein' to hot or hell's breathin' lungs/
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killuminatic K.O.
Big Woody K.O.
Da Solution 5-1
Big Woody 5-2
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killuminatic K.O.
Da Jokah K.O.
Whiskey 5-2
dawgfatha_13 5-3
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10-25-04, 08:06 PM
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bringin' new thoughts to the name disability-flossed in tight wear shiny shoes you feelin' me
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IP: 0BF5 0FDF
lets get some feed back from you, hit it up.
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Battle's
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killuminatic K.O.
Big Woody K.O.
Da Solution 5-1
Big Woody 5-2
LOSSES
killuminatic K.O.
Da Jokah K.O.
Whiskey 5-2
dawgfatha_13 5-3
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10-25-04, 08:10 PM
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IP: 8B20 A98E
Alright, its got points for creativity, but it almost couldnt keep up with itself. I wanted to see more. What it could really use is more creativity in the words, only because the topic itself is so different. But overall i liked it.
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10-25-04, 08:30 PM
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bringin' new thoughts to the name disability-flossed in tight wear shiny shoes you feelin' me
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IP: 0BF5 0FDF
yo kill feed pun man he goin to die.i was thinkin of hittin me up with a rappa, but i really dont understand what its for. what is it for? an wat u supposed to do?
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Battle's
openmic
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killuminatic K.O.
Big Woody K.O.
Da Solution 5-1
Big Woody 5-2
LOSSES
killuminatic K.O.
Da Jokah K.O.
Whiskey 5-2
dawgfatha_13 5-3
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10-26-04, 05:08 PM
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bringin' new thoughts to the name disability-flossed in tight wear shiny shoes you feelin' me
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IP: CD96 0C90
what do ya'll think hit me up with some info
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Battle's
openmic
WINS
killuminatic K.O.
Big Woody K.O.
Da Solution 5-1
Big Woody 5-2
LOSSES
killuminatic K.O.
Da Jokah K.O.
Whiskey 5-2
dawgfatha_13 5-3
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