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11-05-04, 09:18 PM
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G.Y.T.
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Elemental Soul vs Dabatos
IP: 8491 1474
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20 lines max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 = KO topic: A Plauge! Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-05-04 at 10:18 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
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11-05-04, 09:19 PM
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IP: 8491 1474
Dabatos has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-04 09:19 PM.
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11-05-04, 09:20 PM
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IP: AD30 A0F8
Elemental Soul has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-04 09:20 PM.
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11-05-04, 09:59 PM
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Crossing the Phyco's Path
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IP: AD30 A0F8
The united states,a land where evil is extolled,
Innocense is rejected,yet we refuse to sell our souls, Stuck in poverty,causing the animosity of honesty, So obviously,our only hopes are winnin the lottery, So sin spreads like a disease,but truly not caused by the poor, Dis plague kills us,cuz da government will not give us more, I speak to the lord,hoping he'll answer me with a miracle, We must learn through parables,our lives are just unbearable, Africans were enslaved,traded through the middle passage, Columbus betraded and invaded indians,death is massive, How people suffer now,reminds me of back in history, Some struggle for a dollar,we want everlasting victory, Thats it,we had enough,riots become significant, Ilegal imigrants,wheres our freedom?this is fucken inclement, Cutting the throat of the governments policys,and possibly, We can get our fucken way through theories of philosophy, I want the ones who struggle to unite,fight for your piece, I want Crips to shake the hands of Bloods,cutting your leash, Heal the poison,be inspired by those who escaped the dark, From being Jesus disciples,or the brain that Tupac sparked, |
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11-05-04, 10:08 PM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: 8491 1474
topic: A Plauge [The Plauge] I saw a report on the Fox news, that their was a mysterious plauge, Spreading faster then a bacteria's rage, deadly in very serious ways... Too many ppl frearing wit craze, stayin home where its merely as safe N gets worst after hearin the states its reached getin near to this place.. [The Syptoms] The death rate is over ten thousand innocents, only killed in one week, Syptoms are from unkown scars to scratches dat makes someone bleed... Which will end up making one weak, to the point that they can't even see.. Bleeding out of their eyes, if this happens then they got the unkown disease.. [Fear is Gone] After two more months of fear, it's said no people has had the infection.... Death rates have lessend, but 2 be sure, everyone must get an anti-injection.. It's sed for our protection, an anti-injection would be takin the right direction... But i wish i never got that injection, cuz of dat shot, i learned a bad lesson... [The Lesson] When I arrived home from work, I saw my pale brother full of weakenss... First thing to come to my mind, is what happend to this wonderful genius.. Blink my eyes a couple times, it was just too horrific for me to believe this.. Infected with the Anthrax disease, A cure, no scientist has ever achieved it... [The End] It's been 1 year since that event, and half the country has been wiped out... I have no family alive now, and geting rid of this disease i have high doubts... At times I cry about, how i could of saved my family from takin that shot... Because that shot was givin by terrorists, which was never to be stopped... Good Luck |
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11-05-04, 10:09 PM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: 8491 1474
good verse..uppin good verse..uppin good verse..uppin good verse..uppin good verse..uppin good verse..uppin good verse..uppin good verse..uppin good verse..uppin
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11-06-04, 01:04 AM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: 8491 1474
uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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11-06-04, 12:49 PM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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11-06-04, 03:58 PM
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Crossing the Phyco's Path
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IP: AD30 A0F8
uppin...leave links for me to vote on
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11-06-04, 04:39 PM
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IP: 8F97 997B
Voted For: Elemental Soul
both came good as hell but i gotta give this one to elemental dabatos u should have put all that shit together into one thing instead of dividing it up kinda lost me there altho nice flow last 4 lines did it for me elemental hot shit keep it up |
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11-06-04, 11:54 PM
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Crossing the Phyco's Path
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IP: AD30 A0F8
uppin 2 leave links for me to vote on
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11-07-04, 01:03 AM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: 3A63 EE3E
dick rider alert..................................
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11-07-04, 01:29 AM
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IP: 926C 118D
Voted For: Dabatos
Dabatos gets this becuase his structure made it easy to know what the topic was ad keep track and not lose it. nice work dabatos. sorry elemental. but i vote honestly. peace return da favor.
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11-07-04, 01:31 AM
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Killin' G'z
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IP: 3B72 F6C7
Voted For: Dabatos
Dabatos - Good verse, your flow was good.. and you had a good structure. Best Line - [The End] It's been 1 year since that event, and half the country has been wiped out... I have no family alive now, and geting rid of this disease i have high doubts... At times I cry about, how i could of saved my family from takin that shot... Because that shot was givin by terrorists, which was never to be stopped... Worst Line - The death rate is over ten thousand innocents, only killed in one week, Syptoms are from unkown scars to scratches dat makes someone bleed... Which will end up making one weak, to the point that they can't even see.. Bleeding out of their eyes, if this happens then they got the unkown disease.. Elemental Soul - iight spit, you had some good flow.. and a good vocab. Best Line - Stuck in poverty,causing the animosity of honesty, So obviously,our only hopes are winnin the lottery, Worst Line - I speak to the lord,hoping he'll answer me with a miracle, We must learn through parables,our lives are just unbearable, OVERALL - good topical battle, but I gotta give this to Dabatos, he had a better flow for topic.. and a better way of typing it. Ele your shit was iight, you just need to work on some more creative shit. vote - Dabatos Return the fav... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156859
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11-07-04, 01:36 AM
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IP: 926C 118D
Reaturn da favor in my sig. plz. i'll return da favor in any way.
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