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Old 06-20-05, 03:48 AM   #1
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Tephlon vs. Stanza vs. C.A.L.I

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4 Lines (2 Against Each Opponent)
Check Ins due Wednesday
Verses due Friday
(Due dates are all eastern)

The top 2 in votes get the win, so voters.. vote like this..

1.
2.
3.

Go read the rules if you dont know them..

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Old 06-20-05, 06:30 AM   #2
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lmfao a bi week good ill get my k.o .mem do i get both wins if i get all the votes or vice versa for someone else?
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No I wont battle you, usage of the word ducked is played. get over it Im mod........have a nice day.

^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
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Old 06-20-05, 09:35 AM   #3
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LOL ''bi week''...swingin them pun'z both ways huh?

Check......good luck y'all.
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Old 06-20-05, 12:15 PM   #4
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Fuck it, i'ma set the standards for this....drop right now, don't take days boys...drop soon as you can...


Empire spittin fire? ..........this aint higher thinkin, you dont get puns in Poetry
personals played out with the hebrews, i can already predict your ''flow-at-me''


''Stanz'a bitch'' ...He tripped over trynna take the onestepbeyond Elevation
asked to be the my ''right hand man''......homo even offerd a demonstration


..............
I Hate explainin shit, but the cali punch is pretty simple.....all his ''personals'' towards me would of been dope....about 7 months ago lol..
1st line n the stanza bar....he lost too onestepbeyond an osb used ''stanz'a bitch'' in his verse -no its not biting-...second line...when i offerd him a position in my crew, he asked too be my right hand man lol.

No hate Stanza, we homeboys.

Drop soon as you can y'all.
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Old 06-20-05, 12:47 PM   #5
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LOL You Str8 Teph you Knew we was gonna meet in This tourny someday LOL

So Ima checking In Now m,,,,,,,,,,.......

And droppin

Yo Your Punchez Are "Supportless" Like "Boneless Chicken"..Ill Hang You Like Jesus
Only Reason You a "Dirty Baby" is Bcuz I Shitted on You When You was a "Fetus".
CALI Wants "Two Winds" At Once?...He Better Start Blowin Them Dicks Fast
Because The Only Time you Ever Got a "Win" Was When You Was "Pass Gas"

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Explanation
1st bar-You Should get it A Fetus is a Baby Not born yet
2nd bar-He said can He get two wins in this battle or one and so I said he better Blow them Dicks fast (d.r) and then the second line you should get

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Old 06-20-05, 07:44 PM   #6
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TEPHLON A.K.A VERBAL SHOTTA
No wonder hes shook put my alais twice and his only once in his avy
Verbal shotta?....how his verbals gonna penetrate if tephlon makes he?

^^FOR THOSE WHO DONT KNOW MY ALAIS IS ... ^^

STANZA
Kids been sonned so many times it takes d.n.a scans to pinpoint the father
Stanza will never be a vet he ducks war with good heads hes a draft dodger
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No I wont battle you, usage of the word ducked is played. get over it Im mod........have a nice day.

^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
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Old 06-20-05, 08:16 PM   #7
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1.cali
2.stanza ( liked the jesus bar)
3. teph

depending on whose style u like more, this is a close battle
 
Old 06-20-05, 08:28 PM   #8
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Verbal, I don't like gay jokes just cause they're played, but i've never seen the right hand man thing that was kinda clever. Your first bar was like okay, but needed rewording.

Stanza, the dirty fetus line was pretty funny. The pass gas thing I wasn't feeling so much, but it wasn't too bad.

Cali, your wording ain't direct and to the point man. The 2nd bar coulda been good the idea of being a vet, but wasn't harsh at all the way you said it as you weakened the punch by saying "he's a draft dodger" at the end. Your 1st bar also seemed a bit forced. Here's how I see it:

1 - Stanza
2 - Teph
3 - Cali
 
Old 06-20-05, 09:26 PM   #9
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i dont want to sway, but stanza, check your facts man....lol.........

1.cali
2.teph
3.stanza
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Old 06-20-05, 09:48 PM   #10
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1. CALI
2. Tephlon
3. Stanza

Decent verses by all
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Old 06-21-05, 12:27 AM   #11
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1. teph
2. CALI
3.Stanza

reasons...... i found stanzas to be very unoriginal and non hard hittin...... very meh concepts with aight wording.....

Cali had some ok bars.... avvy doesnt rhyme the way u think it does, but i guess thats aight.... also i heard ur "my name surrounds" u thing in one of ur battles in KORV, and ur stanza bar was only ok..... but that first line (if it rhymes like u think it does) was alot better than stanzas drop

Tephlon had some okay stuff, both bars were decent, and thats mainly the reason u took this, along with CALIs errors and bad wording..... ur second bar was pretty good in my opinion cuz it had a nice spin on it and it wasnt just callin him gay, u were creative about it...... this wasnt the greatest of battles, and it was a harder choice cuz no one was the clear victor, but this is wat i thought
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Old 06-21-05, 05:26 AM   #12
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1. cali
2. teph
3. stanza

good battle
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Old 06-21-05, 11:25 PM   #13
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1. Teph
2. Cali
3. Stanza

Some played punches, but for some reason I liked Teph's better. First time for everything.
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Old 06-22-05, 10:52 AM   #14
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Teph
Cali
Stanza

Pretty decent punches allround, a couple i wernt feelin...
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1. cali
2. teph
3. stanza

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