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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206050
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playing.

beat should never used that beat.

Intro,is weird. your putting a huge change into your normal voice, try spitting your rhymes with your usual voice.dont fake anything.
(hope thats not your real voice)

Overall the track isnt good.

no beef yo ....buh keep practicing fa real....practice on everything... you cant even really hear wa chu sayin cus it sound like u mumblein, or wateva...and not on beat...sound like u just sayin shit, puttin words together,...stay up.........

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PSA

i really cant judge English hip-hop cuz even the famous ones sound just weird to me like their flow is off.. but i know its just cuz im not used to it....

but, like everybody else is saying i thought it sounded like u were trying to hard to sound a certain way, just flow yourself dont fake shit.. and yeah like Montana said it was hard to follow the verse..

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lol..................................

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Beat waz aight but not along wit the voice, you scream too much I hardly could understand, but I figured that if you speak clearly the track will be good, keep practicin, no beef.. peace

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Bizzacckkk

yea i been hearin that like a muafucka, i guess ima tone down da anger on da next track

holla at me tho, if you got any advice or feedback