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Old 10-31-05, 02:07 PM   #1
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The One I Fear

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The One I Fear




Dark hooded shadows slither across dark tapestries of brimstone and flames.
Sharp claws scratch through stone pieces, fall in pentagrams as demons whisper my name.
Veins run cold with iced watery rivers of glaciers broken in plasma streams
Blankets of midnight encase my sight; nets of darkness trap my screams.
Moonlights beams reflect shattering light off the curved sickles blade.
As it rises, slicing air like the finest knife then disappears in shade.
My frame shiver, but not the cold, I see my name etched in stone.
And all warmth leaves my spirit as the darkness seeps in my bones.
Extinguished candle flames leave wisps of smoke I inhale my breathing broken.
My eyes held by immeasurable weight trying to force them open.
But no matter how hard I try I fail to prevail my victory spoils.
The presence enters my environment I smell dried blood in the old soil.
Death smiles his teeth a millions blades a millions swords of a million knights.
Bloody with the innocent and evil their existence mixed into a normal life.
His breath a gray cloud that thickens and becomes the darkest of smoke.
As I stare into his bottomless eyes which beckon a absence of hope.
But my faith is my hope and faith in hope is all I have so I keep the faith.
Yet dark hands open my chest to expose my black heart encased within the shaded space.
The beats rate like the race of stampeding horses thundering hooves cracking my soul’s walls.
As fire sizzles my flesh on my knees in flames I shiver in cold halls.
The reaper stalls…robes billow in stark clouds knocking light to its knees in smashing blows.
Palaces crumble crystal ceiling fall…clear diamonds crash through thrones.
I stand amidst pictures of royal clones lines to replace the demise of the king.
Ruby red blood leaves splotches of burgundy patterns across angelic wings.
Stare at rings the stones polluted with the lives of slaves who died for stones.
Cuz’ whether shiny or colored they are still stones so pretty rocks are truly all I own.
Sins stack upon bones spines crumble under pressure.
But the weight of the world is more then the universe measures.
Simple pleasures soft leathers across backs the devils scams.
100 men died for my chain..and that’s my claim to fame as a better man?!!
The rain falls through the dark halls as my spirit is dragged.
Across the corpses who died from drugs and young thugs in gang affiliated flags.
I grab bodies like smoke in exhaust pipes seeing the cost of life.
As young men hold there crosses tight my body’s pulled to darkness forced from the light.
Apologies fall in deaf ears as I near the corpse.
I see my face, realizing my own fate.
And death tells me..........................all is lost.
But that cost is more then remorse can settle.
Cuz” not diamonds, not gold but souls are the cost of the devil.
And life could’ve been better so I clutched metal and cursed god in all his names.
And amidst flames my brain remains sane as I rest my neck across angel’s blades.
My blood trickles like water down ice cycles in warm winters.
Pens drop lightening in prays of righteous who mourn sinners.
Screams of angry men, who have been here for ages.
Broken spines separate lines across biblical pages.
Snatched from the fire by chains of barbwire my skin peeling.
Then bright lights as me and the sheets fight under spinning ceilings.
A smell of ammonia, the owner not presently present.
As I realize my breath has not died….................
…....................I’m back in my land among peasants.
Try to stand but hands push me down to my bed.
And my thoughts swirl in my world then darkness crashes my head.
Past remembrance of late September raindrops falling like mini bombs.
The explosions have stolen my inner calm.
Inside my palm is poison amidst noises of street traffic.
When violent action broken among fractions.
Of other nations who felt the placement of a kings soldier was too close.
Then what happened was magic…..
…..Sparks of light in dark waters and blue smoke.
A new hope was boldly written across faded pages.
Amidst a trail of plans failed and sedated rages.
Shattered thoughts caught in a web of deception.
As I fight this new life against a dead reflection.
So as I melt my former self into a new mixture.
I see a wrinkled face as I start to waste in a smooth picture.
A sound of voices saying my choices weren’t in the divine plans.
But I’m just one man with no helping hands through my time span.
So I stand now as I always stood on my own.
And close my eyes as I embrace this darkness as home.



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^^i left feed on this and misery by whiteboy
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Old 10-31-05, 05:31 PM   #2
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this was insane...this is some of the best imagery i've ever seen...and my fuckin name is IN VISION..jesus...i really don't know what else to say....
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Old 10-31-05, 05:33 PM   #3
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^lol thanks homie
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Old 11-01-05, 02:12 AM   #4
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Old 11-01-05, 11:41 PM   #5
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wow why this is getting slept on puzzles me this is like open mic of the month shit
best imagery ive ever seen on rv no lie just wow at the imagery and emotion in this piece like noooo other piece to hit this site props cali for reals
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Old 11-02-05, 12:30 AM   #6
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^thanks willa i was wondering the same thing i feel this is one of my best pieces and i feel it surpasses most the shit on r.v but my d.rs are gone on to better things and my haters cant find anything bad to say i guess
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Old 11-02-05, 07:45 AM   #7
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Sup fams been a long time,

Dam this was fucking insain,.. one of the best verse I have have read in a
long time !!!

I was just mad as fuck !! everything flowed really well, imagery was the best I
have ever seen, Vocab was solid, painted a clear picture of what was going on
in your head !!

Dam fams stay up and keep writing

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Old 11-02-05, 12:15 PM   #8
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^another person says the same thing yet im not up for no open mic award wtf is going on:/
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Old 11-02-05, 03:00 PM   #9
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Damn this shyt dope homie , nice ass drop i was really feeling it , You had nice emotions , very good Imagery its what really made your peice so good..you had nice vocab and wordplay even though once ina while it could have been better..but it was all good i was really feeling this drop..Only thing that through me off was your structure..keep it up
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Old 11-03-05, 07:16 PM   #10
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buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuump stop sleeping hell be gone for 2 weeks but i will rtf
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Old 11-03-05, 10:34 PM   #11
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Old 11-03-05, 11:29 PM   #12
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^^^^^ Am i looking at a mirror, shit shit was sinful i like it...collab???? C
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Old 11-03-05, 11:31 PM   #13
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Your just making me feel like dirt, looks like i'ma have to kick this up a notch
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Old 11-23-05, 06:04 PM   #14
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^^lol i dont never be on fool when i get back on ill h0lla good look on all the feedback upppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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Old 11-24-05, 01:18 AM   #15
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