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12-05-05, 01:13 AM
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"Louis"...A Rip Off Of Stan Lmfao...
IP: DB16 D9CD
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www.myspace.com/limitededitionakainnovation Word...me and Crazy Hades' version of Stan. Verses 1-3: Written by Crazy Hades, Performed by Limited Edition. Verse 4: Written and Perfromed by Limited Edition Beat: Produced by Limited Edition Word...I had troubles flowing Crazy's lyrics because it wasnt written to the beat...so if it's off...forgive me. I edited them as much as I could to flow better...but I couldn't change the words too much. The fourth verse was easy to flow with. I'm sick as fuck too...this shit murdered my throat, but I was pumped to do this track. Leave feed and I'll return the favor. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216103 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216217 Last edited by Limited Edition : 12-05-05 at 09:32 AM. |
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12-05-05, 01:27 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: 8E7F 1337
the beats ight...lol original concept
 lol but it ight...the flows on almost perfect and the lyrics are dope..i had ta go DAMN at some of it...lol at u writing back a hateful letter on the 3rd verse...i was expectin the same stan beat but....this beat was ight..props at u producin it id give this piece a 8/10.....4.5 for lyrics....3 for the storytellin and 1.5 for the concept...lol keep at it dawg u gettin better |
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12-05-05, 08:56 AM
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Thanks...
Uppin'...it was slept on all night... |
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12-05-05, 10:56 AM
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OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
Let me break this down. I don't see why you'd rehash Em's concept unless you put a truly unique spin on it. And, from my perspective, you didn't really do that. As it stands on its own, this is a good track. However, my mind kept reverting back to Em's Stan and I concluded this falls short of his effort. The constant letters you rapped about became repetitive. Your flow is consistent throughout though.
Good track that could have stood out more with a hyper beat, better writing of the climax, and a more creative spin on an already dope concept. I'd rate this 7/10 no hate 1 Last edited by Tha Q. : 12-05-05 at 02:02 PM. |
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12-05-05, 01:50 PM
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IP: DB16 D9CD
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Haha yeah I know the entire concept was bitten... ...But this track was only for some fun. Thanks for the feed. Uppin'. |
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12-05-05, 02:31 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: 77F1 CDA7
ROFL AT THE INTRO
Aight You Come On..... Flows Nice-Why You Say Its Off?It Fell off Like 2wice I Thougth Deliverys Nice,Can Tell Your Ill Though Presence Is Nice Lyrics On 1 To 3rd Are Nice Quite Deep Lmao@Why U Smoke Weed,Bad Behaviour Lol 3rd verse Same As Others lol Fourth Verse Flows Nice 4th Lyrics Are Good,Flows A Lot Better...But Yeah Obviously Lmao@Slim Shady Fake Bit LMAO...At These Lyrics Lol Ok LMMFAO@RAPE ME LINE Overall:8.5/10 Lol,Good Track Plz Rtf On My:"Wanna B.Daniel" Link:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216320
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12-05-05, 02:36 PM
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L.E
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Thanks...
Uppin... |
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12-05-05, 04:07 PM
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Just searching.
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IP: DB41 DC69
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12-05-05, 04:09 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: 77F1 CDA7
^^Get The Fuck on Aim
We Need To Make More Beats Holla At My New Aim Unf Aka B Daniel
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12-05-05, 04:11 PM
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Just searching.
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IP: DB41 DC69
I'm on. The AIM is I Defy AQ. Listen to the song.
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12-05-05, 04:32 PM
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Champion
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IP: 4AB7 117A
listenin...lol at u becomin even more closer to bein eminem lol...beat is koo...eerie..flow is nice..fell off like 2wice...quality is koo..ps2 mic?...lyrics are always good from u..emotion is nice...presence on the mic is real nice..delivery nice...second verse....this is better...same as before jus better flow..didnt fall off really here...third the same as before...pretty much constant throughout..if the next one is a level better..this will be better..LOL at u fuckin kiddin me...LOL at chad mgchee cupid...flow is dope...LOL at slim shady bein fake..LOL at that shirt off line..haha i love this verse...crackin me up...rape me lol....LOL at the boy dying....gd track...
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12-05-05, 05:19 PM
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Addicted
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IP: F257 B07C
intro was aight but aint really feeling it ....emotion was aight to me but iono your verse was kinda on the blan side feel me that could of been upped...the beat was cool quality is aight overall this shit was decent stay up
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12-05-05, 10:35 PM
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IP: DB16 D9CD
A'ight thanks all...Ecko I'll return the favor sorry I couldn't hit you back earlier.
Uppin'. |
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12-06-05, 02:19 PM
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The Alien Toung
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IP: A6CC 8109
checkin it...
intro is hot come in a bit off..beat is..eh ok....flow is on..good story telling..decent shit
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12-06-05, 02:26 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: BCC3 5D61
lmfao at oh my god not another letter haha lol, mmm nice beat, string gets anoyinh, nice flow, fells off sometimes but still good, oh my god you got to be fucking kidding me lmfao! nice responce to his letters, i seriously love this track, you should of put more emotions or frustration in the last verse, rapping me, whos the other voice??nice intro, love the outro, dope ass track
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