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Old 03-23-03, 10:01 PM   #1
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conquest

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gods given me a talent to rip every mc on dis earth-
some see it as a gift, others see it as a curse-
like alexander the great, im here to conquer all-
me being too cocky and confident is going to be my downfall-
i can hit u wit game more diverse dan religions-
smack ms cleo a 100 times so she can see my vision-
im seekin to devour rookie mcs like da devil seekin a soul-
i ben plannin **** since i was ten years old-
not patriotic, im on dis conquest some call me pyshotic-
shootin niggas up moe dan a fiend shootin up narcotics-
one day my empire will fall and bow to another great kingdom-
my veruses is engraved in u, evertime u read-em-

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Old 03-23-03, 11:44 PM   #2
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9/11 isn't cool to make fun of yet. i know quite a bit of people that would even cuss you out for that one! otherwise it's an average verse.
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Old 03-25-03, 08:53 AM   #3
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^^^I agree....i see that you edited it out tho...it's a nice line and all, just bit to early for that shit...other than that outlandish slander (ass-hole...lol) this was a descent verse, nice structure, and vocab...descent...descent....

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Old 03-25-03, 10:36 AM   #4
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yo i thought it was aight.. pretty short but it flows well.. but i liked the rhyme scheme sounds like some type a shit id spit, nonetheless it was short and sweet keep it up.
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