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09-01-03, 07:39 AM
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"The Eleete"
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At the End of My Rope
IP: C876 896B
-At the End Of My Rope-
Sep 1st 03 0430-0450 -ELEETE- / SoL yo have you ever got to the point where you feel like, theres nothing to live for? cause i feel like im at the end of my rope............... yo sittin an writing the words im losing my mind/ losing my head im reaching for the end of my time/ the end of my rhymes no more, ive reached the end of my line/ stopping for no one runnin straight through all o' da signs/ man this is serious i aint commitin no crimes/ cause when i leave this world yo im leaving nothing behind/ im tired of getting no where yo im tired o' trying/ you must be trippin trippin if you thinkin im lying/ im tired of wasting away my nights alone an jus cryin/ id rather be sittin in hell burnin an fryin/ but this evil keeps my tears from any hopes of them dryin/ i reach my hand out to you but its too late.........im dyin. Last edited by ELEETE : 09-01-03 at 08:44 AM. |
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09-01-03, 08:36 AM
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IP: 19AF 50C1
frankly i like that shit nicely done and creative in detail hot
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09-19-03, 03:53 AM
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"The Eleete"
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IP: FAD9 BD2A
yo thanks for the feedback
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01-26-04, 12:01 AM
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A King Missing a Queen...
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IP: 8D7B 43DF
This was an alright read. I thought it was going to be horrible because of the structure. But then I started to get into the flow. NIce work....
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