thanx for the honest feed back but by breaking it into bars u kinda messed it up. my lines DO ryme if U dont put em into bars like that. try reading it a lil quicker.

U ubsurd if U think my word is not heard by gods and Goliaths alike/
Ur band ubserves while U get served and hurt in lyrical street fights/

^^this line should be read like this rather then split up. sorry I aint do the whole ryming in bars things. thanx for the feedback anyway.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..