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Old 07-29-04, 08:07 AM   #15
raw killa
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
 
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Originally Posted by MaNiPuLaTiOn
wen peeps read ur shit,they read it line by line.
so the way u structure it..makes it not rhyme
wen i read ur verse..it jus looks like multis...
if it was audio then it dnt matter..it wud rhyme
but this is txt...and it looks like it dnt rhyme.
fix ya structure,n u will get beta.



u act TOUGH,n ROUGH on da net but its ur only ACTIN,n its obvious chips n
a sandwich is da only things u PACKIN,hatin me cuz i got wut they LACKIN,SLACKIN hard when it
comes 2 RAPPIN,bitch slapped? baby bottoms da only thing u SLAPPIN,calm da fuck down b4 ur peeps
as wtf jus HAPPENED,niggaz instagatin dis CAN,opener 2 get da CAN of whoopass CRACKIN,YAPPIN like
faggots n whinnin like bitches so ya must like havin ur ass PACKED IN

ayt here's a run down...
see dis line?

i started rhymin wit tough n rough ok u wit me?
than i used it n wit da line i started rhymin wit actin n packin still wit me?
this is called a multi yes i use a lot of them but aint shit wrong wit it.
y u cant admit yea i got skillz r u that gased up bou tur own u gotta hate?
i dont want beef i jus wanna do my thing n move on so dead dis shit admit im rite n move on 2 ayt?
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