Voted For: Verbal Abuse

Damn! you roasted the fuck out of this motha fucka..

Struture - this is all you lost on verbal, yo lines were really stretched and unappealing, j dot's weren't..

punchlines - you came out way harder than him, hias opener was weak as fuck, you came out strong..

wordplay, you have a lot more multies and rhymes were better, his were dr. suess basic...

personals, none stuck out, i guess that this i a tie..

vocab - every word you said had more meaning into it and on average was more scholoarly and sounded better with more syllables..

flow.. your multies helped you to take it, j dot's flow was basic, yours was smooth and sounded nice..

overall.. verbal abuse killed the shit out of this guy and i feel bad for him.. naw, on the real though, verbal, you took it, you had better flow, vocab and bpunchlines that were more creative, j dot, you need to elevate, a lot..

return favor in my thread, will you, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143487

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