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trojan | 5 | 62.50% | |
NoMercy | 3 | 37.50% | |
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09-12-04, 09:12 AM | #16 | ||
Better than you..
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Voted For: NoMercy
trojans verse was pretty nice i felt most of ya punchlines except for the waterbed.....i know theres more behind it i just didnt feel it. wordplay was nice ye vocab just good, overall pretty tight verse especially the way u finished it off. no mercy verse i didnt really feel at all.....nothin hit it for me just very plain and boring.....i see ur structure was alright and ya vocab was alright but man all i can say is 'elevate'. u coulda done sumthin with him naming himself after a condom brand tho....good idea. Vote Switched
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