Voted For: Limited Edition

LIMITED NO DOUBT GETS THIS BAT. He had better strucutre better imagry on helping me to understand the topic more u did also but he just made it short and sweet here is what I liked and how I graded it.


LIMITED
All Of A Sudden...The Jungle Is Rushing Towards The Plane...
...A Head Rush...A Crash...And Then Blackness...

I wake up...my neck hurts, mouth dry, my face caked with dust...
...I look at the pilot...recoil in horror...his face is brutally crushed
It's an effort...but I am finally free from my restraining device...
...I look around the plane...it's like a hell in this jungle paradise
19.7/20

KON
Undergrowth Swallowing My Ankle's, Stumbling Our Control.
Bodie's Shrivelling Up, Delving Into Sleep, Sun Stripping My Soul.

Snake's Snapping At The Random Path, On Which I Traipsed.
The Jungle Was Too Savage, The Climate Alone Could Solve One's Fate.

Boot's Were Gripless, Blunt & Torn By Creature's, Discarded Object's & Thorn's.
Sweltering Heat Scarred My Hydration, Was Like Being Hung From Satan's Horn's.
16.1/20

and hey hit up on my sig peace.

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