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01-08-05, 06:24 PM
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The Flame-from my mixtape
IP:
this track will be on my mixtape....."Da Problem Child V.1".....i just aint done in mixing yet.....i gotta write a last verse.....
so i wanna ask yall to read dis and tell me if i should change something or not (tha beat is done, i produced) so i want feedback.....please artist: Riot track: Tha Flame album: Da Problem Child-Mixatpe V.1 verse 1: dat nigga Riot from tha D, liquor odor comin from my pores// got my doggy tag on, fruit-of-tha-loom is on my drawls// when hoes see me, all i see is open jaws// i aint gone neva love anotha bitch, fuck em all// its real murderous G shit, stop hatin// tha only way yall can prevail is if my fuckin brain stop continplatin// im spendin dough by tha pot, you want a demonatration?// well here you go, check out my voicemails, tha banks is waitin// ridin in Lac's got my ceaser cut in tha air// got lil bustas sayin i got too much bread too fast, dats not fair// and i aint even slangin drugs, nope i wont go there// my dough come from real work, not tha way yall niggaz make fares// im stone cold like tha austin in texas// we got huge dreams nigga, like sellin out in vegas// i gots tha blade close by just in case for tha hataz// and if you insist you want it, then come and get it then nigga//(yeah!) hook: im kickin some of tha illest bars you eva heard (heard)// got all these fuckin bitch made niggaz round here scurred (scurred)// and i could give a shit less bout what yall say (say)// im gone keep tha flame in me till my dying day (day)// ..::repeat 2x::.. verse 2: im still here, still gutta, whats good?// still changin tha flow up from tha hood// so grime, so raw, so true// still walkin up to hataz like what you gone do?// im ready for rappin, lets get tha clappin// lights...camera...and its time for some action// its not no actin, hoe im true to this// got more bars than downtown Chi-town and shit// dis is more than a hit, nigga its more than a track// got multiple ways to make sure i dont fall back// i keeps my shit together and gets paid for dat// you know how i gets down, im tha slickest cat// sickest nigga in tha booth spittin nothin but tha truth// im doin my thang like my name is babe ruth// knockin flows out tha park like aint nothin dude// and its all tha best nigga now fill my shoes!// ..::hook 2x::.. good lookin in advance yall.....4real
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Detroit PlayBoiz (DPB) 4 life nigga.....and im out Money Fiend Ent. MY OPEN MICS, i want some feedz.......
comlex 16's-part 2 (collab wit Dolla Bill) susan, susan (personal) Tha Flame-from my mixtape my remix of "What you gone do?" Last edited by -RIOT- : 01-09-05 at 08:52 PM. |
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