Voted For: C.A.L.I

C.A.L.I

Herbish faker damn perpatraitior yous a 'Sonic' groupie
'Datruth' you couldnt smoke a herb in a chronic movie!!(1)
^good opener

Occupations listed as 'Grilling Mathafuckas' ......damn yous a loser(2)
Bow to to my 'Godlyness' my 'Disciple' you from the land of 'Hoover'(3)
^good good...
'B' you 'Dizzy' think i would just give you a win(4)
Ya records like old rims...............no spins!!(5)
^hehe,okay

'Fuxjustaword'.....well it is till i 'Fux' 'Fux' up with verbs
Cuz 'Fux' just a 'Fux' up 'Fux'ed up 'Fux'ing computer nerd
^not really feelin it

This real 'Easy' for 'E' no wonder you changed ya sig picture(6)
Ya verse is looking 'BAD BOY' and i aint talking bout 'Big' wit ya
^damn,nice closer

Overall solid drop: structure n flow were tight, vocab was good. Had hardhitting punches and mad personals in there, also nice wordplay...


FuxJustAWord

CALI thinks he's ahead me, his old avvy thinks he beheads me
the "king of Beef' ? I know! we've all heard about Wendy's
^nice opener

So it tempts me, to see if u "bite," wen u've got more beef than fuckin cattle
Don't look back after dumpin shit? so ill be the only one to up this battle
^haha,funny...

Givin u parkinson’s, ur left shook and rattled, thats y u have no precision or aim
cuz in this battle, ur punches land farther apart than ur location and name
^decent one

cmon mayne, u even think ur a n****, i figure uve got ur freckles mixin with facts
but to step back, its no suprise, wen u have the whole site "listed" as black"
^good good

atleast a job "well done" with the "beef" there, but nothin surrenders my brew
and wit my "raw" lyrics ur chances are "rare",................................................. ..................... .........cuz my punches'll tenderize you
^bleh closer

Structure,flow n vocab were tight. Had some creative punches and mad funny personals in there,not really feeling your closer though...

Damn,this is a close battle...both had mad good punches and personals, creativity goes to Fuxjustaword but i was feeling Cali's flow more...uhm, in the end i go with Cali,no hate, was dope battle from both!

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