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Legion vs Tstorm
IP: BB93 433A
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As the wind swirls, dust clouds embrase this dessolate land
gun shaking in my hand..scared,bruised,boots filled with sand i shiver,stationed here behind the sandbags is like hells torture petrified,i can hear the screams and scenes of human deborture a test like no other..enemy closes,and i pray god keeps me cover thoughts of my family left alone, and dreams of my distant lover the incontrolable desire within me to flee, grabs hold and i stumble flash back, must gain control..i start to hear a distant rumble a wall to my left suddenly crumbles..i jump in a state of panic troops around me grab there rifles..the scene is somewhat manic my weather hand slowly reaches around, i manage to grab my rifle. actions must be quick, positive and decisive now..no time to stifle a vision of blurred aura appears and changes state through my scope i cant stop the shaking, but somehow i manage to pickout his throat the bullet tears through his skin, and guilt fills my soul with dread im frozen in a state of panic as before me my enemy lays..dead.. i cant see my troops..its too dark on this dusty damp cold night my lifes flashing before my eyes..as the enemy has me in there sights i know its the end..my vision blurs, i know im set to meet my maker strangely theres no pain, all i see is my family..in fact i feel safer
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