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Daubs 3 37.50%
E.C 5 62.50%
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Old 06-09-05, 04:45 PM   #16
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Voted For: Daubs

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Daubs:
Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
7/10...Tight 2nd Line
Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
8/10...Liked Tha Set Up & Da 2nd Line Hit Hard
Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
7.5/10...Set Up Was Good, Da 2nd Line Was Nice...Not Dat Strong Tho
Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is had and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
6.5/10...Brought You Down, Glory? But Nice Either Way

Was Feelin Ya Verse, You Had Hard Hittin Punches A Few Personals (You Beat Him B4)...Structure Was Straight, Word Choice Was On Point...Nothin Really Bad About Ya Verse Except Da Closer Was Weak


E.C.
Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
8/10...LOL I Dont Know If Dat Was Humorous, But It Had Me Rollin
Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
7/10...First Line Was BLAH, Set Up Horribly But Da Personal Was Tight
You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
7.5/10...Again Ya 1st Could Be Worded Betta, 2nd Line Was Funni
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
6/10...Really Didnt Like This Closer Either


VOTE: Daubs....Both Closer's Were Weak As Fuck But Yall Middle Bars Were On Da Same Level, E.C. Brought More Humor & Daubs Came Wit Hard Hitters...Loved Da Loose Ends Line, Only Reason Daubs Got This Was Because His Openin Lines Were Worded Alot Betta Than E.C.'s...E.C's My Nig, But Jus Work On Ya Set Ups Ya Lines Tight But Da Set Up Kinda Takes Points Away....Tight Battle Tho Both Niggaz
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